You came to me every night in dreams
You always knew the right words to speak
Your face held all the beauty of the world
Your touch brought passion to a peak
Beautiful angel of my dreams
When would we chance to meet
I knew in my mind that you were real
I’d lay my body at your feet
Then it happened not long ago
As I searched the crowds for you
Our spirits touched, you were there
All my dreams came true
We talked and dreams came to life
You knew the right words to speak
You reached out and touched me
Brought passion to its’ peak
My God we were lovers, we were friends
You filled the core of my soul
You became the world in which I existed
You fit perfectly into my mold
You controlled my every breath
I gave you control over my life
You controlled every part of me
You ask me to be your wife
I blinded myself to every fault
That others saw in you
All the lies you told each day
To me they were true
The more I gave the more you wanted
Of my mind and my soul
Each day another part of me
Was there for you to hold
"Beware of Your Dreams" is a poetic grand. I like its rhythm, voice and message.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Profound; the verse and rhyme is excellent; the write exceptional!!
Blessings,
Robert
sometimes we think we want what we want till we get it
and man can we get it....becareful what you ask/pray for..............
very sobering write
They might come true.)
Sherry this is great advice to be heeded. Fantastic write.
powerful poetry!
We often cast our wishes upon another and paint illusions of the ideal lover over a beast. Good poem. ~~~Nordette
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :(
Paul;-]
Chanti
Exceptionally powerful, profound message in this perfectly penned write--well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)