Our relationship ended the other day
You packed your bags and would not stay
You thought that I would scream and cry
As you told me that final good-bye
I was left with no deep emotions
No love, no hate, no eternal devotion
At some point we ceased to care
Call it 'quits', we did not dare
You found someone who turned you on
I was relieved to see you gone
There was no bitterness left in your wake
No feelings left for you to take
I wasn't numb or feeling down
There was nothing left, no personal ground
I tried to work up some pain
Thought you might come back again
But I felt nothing left in me
Simply happy to be free
I'd rather live my life alone
Than to exist once love is gone.
ã March 2005, Sherry L Gibson
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Understandable and well written, enjoyed the read although sad.
For the most part it did not overtake with sadness instead relief.
These breakup are sometimes a part of life and sometimes they are also warranted!
Sincerely,
~Gwendolyn
Much hugz,
Dee
God bless you. Kathy
I have enjoyed the reading of a wise artistic and beautiful composition... "A Love Ended, I'm Not Broken-Hearted" is a masterpiece.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Nothing is good
When everything is bad
Anything will be better
Than some things I've had.
Now her only concern is being checked for a disease that we pray to God she doesn't have. Wouldn't it be nice if life were as calm as the scene in your photograph above?
blessin's, lovely poem, lovely peace to you,
cynth'ya
A powerful statement that love does not have to leave one brokenhearted. Excellent poem and written extremely well. Great job!
Cynthia
The vibes here on the 'Den' have been strong lately ... amazing; a beautiful pic and equally stunning write!!
Best to you,
Robert
I thought it wrong to feel the way you so articulately penned this, but on reading it a couple of times, I realise that I too would feel happier, "to rather live my life alone
Than to exist once love is gone." What good is it merely existing ?A superb write Sherry, it really hits home.
Stunning picture.
warm hugs
Elga
Had one of those "I don't know why it came to me moments, have to write it down before I forget it" moments, eh? Strongly emotional, energetic, ain't NOBODY gonna mess with me type of write--ENJOYED!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
well done
pax A
nothing then it has been over for a long time.The photo is incredible!
etw
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :(