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You Want What You Want...
by Ms Beeds → (All Poetry by Ms Beeds)
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Female Angst.

 

Totally sucks to find you’re a chick
Completed immersed in the quagmire
You want what you want but are denied
Your situation confounds, your emotions spiral
Trying to manage your conundrum pains
That which denies holds the reins
Your object defies a simple definition
While giving a glance of your personal perdition.
You want what you want but are not given
How long can you manage without his submission?
Not long.
 

 


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 Reviews of "You Want What You Want..."
Reviewed on September 4, 2008
Interesting! Never read YOU before, and I like it!
A challenge is what she be after!
I'm assuming!
YOu will get it... Keep prodding and smiling...
Love your writing style Beeds -
Come! Take a peek, I write all genres - romance, funny, erotica, Dark and Inspiratonal
WRITe-ON!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Soulful SHEExooo

STay Positive!

Reviewed by S Phillips
Reviewed on September 3, 2008
So what are you going to do about it you might ask yourself, to lead you in the right direction, one small step at a time. It's good to clarify the problem. Seems you've done that. You have a voice, worthy of using. I hope you use it to find your way past angst. Cheers.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on September 3, 2008
Sometimes when we set our minds on a goal we just have to work a little harder to achieve it, interesting piece...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on September 3, 2008
Well, I certainly hope you have got what you want, for I hate to see you in anger.

Sandie May :o)

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on September 3, 2008
I like reading your poem,It was good and very well written,take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on September 3, 2008
Well, I can honestly say I cannot identify with a young lady's angst,
but just so ya know most guys are going through something quite similar, but call it a "guy thing"...Welcome to the Den, Ed & Rufuz (w00f)


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