This poem is short but great. It has depth and leaves us thinking. There's definitely the presence of the much needed emotion here. It is an affective piece of writing, though I wish this piece was expanded further. I was craving to read more ...
Thanks for sharing and please keep on writing.
Lena
Reviewed by Linda Torrence (Reader)
Reviewed on November 5, 2009
Hi Boo,
This says all that needs to be said in four short lines! So many of us have been hurt by those we love and never know where to go to hide our pain? Very well said, Terry, keep these coming!
YOU HAVE DRAWN A CLEAR PICTURE OF ONE SAYING, 'MIND YOUR OWN BUSINESS AND LEAVE MY ALONE!' AND YOU SAID IT WELL. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE
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Thanks for sharing and please keep on writing.
Lena
This says all that needs to be said in four short lines! So many of us have been hurt by those we love and never know where to go to hide our pain? Very well said, Terry, keep these coming!
Linda
This was a fantastic book which I really enjoyed. The ending was perfect too.
Mary
Good writing and perfect picture.
Connie