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Silver Ribbons
by Terry D. Robertson → (All Poetry by Terry D. Robertson)
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Well, here is a new poem. I would appreciate your honest critique, as I have not written full length in years.


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The night is filled with silver ribbons

Tied in bows around the shining moon

Two people seeking what they need

Gaze at the stars strung together like beads

But broke and scattered much too soon

So I found these words on

Lilac sprays and butterfly wings

And then sat and scrawled down all these

Crazy things

Before losing to your passion under the silver ribbon moon

 

Now the years pass in the dimming of the day

Love is waxing, longing to be free

Having to get married anyway

It turned out to be a necessity

Wait—was that applause I heard

From the mistress of the moon?

Or just the bumping of the logs

The breeze filled with silent silver birds

 

Two lives grew apart like a dying flower

He turns to me and says

“You robbed me of my shining hour”

I said “You took me for your vanity

Under that silver moon now so dour”

Love is an unanswered prayer grown colder

Now I write on wilted flowers

But my words have turned cold and sour

And the moon is fifteen years older

 

The silver ribbons hide behind the moon now

All alone—as I weave them in my hair

Yet I still want to believe

All your broken promises where we once sat

You must have had magic up your sleeve

Beneath the silver ribbons

Getting us to feel like that

 

 

©Terry D. Robertson


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 Reviews of "Silver Ribbons"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on June 30, 2010
Beautifully expressed is this compelling and meaningful write, Terry. Sadly, you express a universal and timeless theme in this world/life. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed on April 13, 2010
Great job with this poem that fits the lives of many!!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Linda Torrence (Reader)
Reviewed on April 13, 2010
I always feel like you are reading people's minds, when you write your poems? So many lives are just like your poem, which was so well written! I too loved the imagery that you projected with your words, to the point that I felt myself in that person. It's a shame that when you marry, everything looks so glorious under those "Rose Colored Glass's" that you don't really look deep enough into that person. Your other dreams are put aside, then before you know it, it's to late to get out as you've got to much invested in that relationship. So, the ribbons just lie together in emptiness, twisted but not together. Very Sad, indeed. Great job Boo, keep up the writing, you haven't lost your touch.

Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe
Reviewed on April 4, 2010
Sad and beautiful. People do grow apart and it has little to do with the intensity of the love first shared. So hold on to the precious moments, they're still as true as they were then.

Reviewed on April 3, 2010
Boo,

What a sad love story. I loved the imagery, and wanted to cry at the end. You've still got it my friend! Excellent write.

Mary


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