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The Builder
by Brenda Joy Dobson → (All Poetry by Brenda Joy Dobson)
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Worldly, he chose an impressive Brick House.

Because dwellings change over time, his eyes

grew distant on moon-lit nights.

Stressed, he found a greener meadow as his eyes

strayed to a stately, yet portly, Manor.

Without hesitating, he picked up his tools and moved in

to change her opulent exterior.

Spent, from his renovation efforts, she left

dragging her splintered imperfections.

Wounded, he chose a frail, Stone Villa.

But like him, she needed constant care.

When he grew weary of her brokenness,

he ventured toward the street's Cold Beams.

Unfulfilled, he wandered Country Roads,

finding Shelter during a swirling rain-storm.

Exhausted, he yielded to her straw-bed.

She covered him warmly, nurturing his dream.

Peacefully, the frail Builder slept.

But rising at dawn to wind-tossed Straw,

he picked up his tools and went out

among Thorns

to build again.

 

bjd

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "The Builder"
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on January 24, 2012
POOR GUY...LOOKING FOR THE PERFECT BUILDING, WHEN ALL THE WHILE...HE'S THE ONE THAT NEEDED TO BE REBUILT. SPLENDID AND ENJOYED! I HAVE ALWAYS ENJOYED YOUR STYLE...THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on March 31, 2009
Some should be satisfied with what they create in the first place. Thorns could have been a wake up call...M

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on March 25, 2009
Great poem.I enjoy reading it,take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Rafiriio Daniels
Reviewed on March 25, 2009
I really liked this one! It was my favorite of the day, complex!

Reviewed on March 25, 2009
I like this alot, sometimes we have to be pricked by the thorns to see the true beauty, thank you again
In Christs Love
Michelle~


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