when your sweet music earns you punishment for mysterious crimes (poem) by Tarek Ali Hassan on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Hanley Harding (Reader)

Reviewed on July 5, 2007

Dear Tarek;

The more times one reads this, the better it becomes. Very nice.

Doc

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 27, 2003

well done!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

Points to ponder indeed! Thank you.

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

forgive them for they feel not what they do
and they feel not what they would not do

alas..that is the plight of the human condition..
Excellent poem...food for thought!
Vesna

Reviewed by Rodd Jokre (Reader)

Reviewed on October 20, 2003

Beautiful words... Thanks...

Reviewed by Jim Dunlap

Reviewed on October 20, 2003

Eloquent indeed.

Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader)

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

This is magical..Bang on target ((grin))

Justin

Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

Really an awesome poem.

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

My comprehension is too low for this one. I keep raading it, but the anchor is cast to deep for me to fathom. Almost like a reflection of a poem or song that casts a long shadow in the mind but circles itself like a dog after its own tail. Not able to make a realistic comment. Just an observation from afar.

Reviewed by Robin Ouzman Hislop

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

Orpheus was rent apart by the Maenads, at least symbolically & I suppose all gnosis maintains the relationship with the Beloved is indidual & individuated, good reading.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on October 11, 2003

oh love that consumes the loving man
oh love that makes vulnerable to the cheating hand
oh love answered with inexorable hate
oh love told and untold
oh thick warmth

oh father

oh floating fungus in the bubbling stream

forgive them

they dare not see

forgive them for they feel not what they do
and they feel not what they would not do

Dear friend Tarek,
You have penned here a gem of write.....Thanks for sharing this with all us of here....This write of yours is filled with deep and profound wisdom....I loved each and every line of this majestic write.....I would say that this is very very insightful read and a must read for all.....cheers...love n luck.....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on October 10, 2003

I love the last two lines best.
Excellent!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 10, 2003

Thanks for arousing the senses with this Tarak! Brings to mind how little we really know.Most of us live our lives totally unaware of how to live.;-) Yet, we do some wonderful things along the way, imagine if we knew what we were doing;-)!