I am glad that you let out all of your anger,fustrations and feelings in this poem in terms of trying to find happiness.I enjoy reading your poetry and hopefully I will read more poems from you in the near future,take care
Edwin
Reviewed by Mark Chevalier (Reader)
Reviewed on February 8, 2009
Welcome! And I enjoyed the depth of emotions in this wonderful poem. So many times we all share a measure of time in our own "personal hell."
Bronwen,
Welcome to AD! Sometimes I think that artists feel emotions deeper than others do. This sadness you describe seems all-consuming. I like how there's a general attitude toward not wanting to feel this way; a search for that silver lining. I like the way you leave it, too. Yes, time performs miracles. Love and Hugs,
Sheila
Welcome to AD Ms.Phoenix (you not living in Tucson, are you?) :-)
"Outlet" has sadness connotations with sparks of hope, thoughts taken to the surface for a solitude that the heart don't want to feel.
Well done Missy!
Indeed, there is pain in which we all dwell that is uniquely our own and I can't help believing that someday we will understand that it's all for the betterment of our souls. I can relate to this.
Thank you Regis for mentioning this Poets name so as I could have my husband read to me her work. First, let me say her work indeed touches the soul and reflects a brilliant talent for writing poetry. I salute you Bronwen Winter Phoenix for a beautiful gift. Soar with that pen in your hand. I look forward to hearing your work again...
Your verses entered my soul and they echo there, Bronwen. I love your poem. I can relate. Thank you for sharing this offering. Welcome to AD. Love and best wishes to you,
First Edition Translation of Teselas by Carmen Crespo X111 César Simón Poetry Prixe 2016 Translated from Spanish by Robin Ouzman Hislop and Amparo Arrospíde
This collection of poetry addresses the nature of time, reflections on the natural world, the difficulty of loss,
contemporary social issues and gratitude for life.
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Welcome to AD! I enjoy your poetry.
Cryssa
Edwin
Brilliantly executed and well versed!
Mark
Welcome to AD! Sometimes I think that artists feel emotions deeper than others do. This sadness you describe seems all-consuming. I like how there's a general attitude toward not wanting to feel this way; a search for that silver lining. I like the way you leave it, too. Yes, time performs miracles. Love and Hugs,
Sheila
"Outlet" has sadness connotations with sparks of hope, thoughts taken to the surface for a solitude that the heart don't want to feel.
Well done Missy!
Georg
Great write,
Pierre
Blessings, J'nia
Janet xoxoxo
Regis