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Revealing You're Lost
By Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse   
Rated "PG" by the Author.
Last edited: Saturday, December 15, 2012
Posted: Sunday, July 26, 2009

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an enlightenment strikes dark poetic expression...

Revealing You’re Lost

 

Masked imputation of your pittance;

Veiled in deceptions lie;

Could traipsing upon harvest meadows…breed your thorns inside?

Do you seek to know salvation? Do you stumble upon versions way?

Crawling into damnations, upon the trifled virgins day?

Call to your ill thought redemptions…sing the glory of shallows dark;

Lurk inside your tormenting reflection;

where no promise of scrimptions spark…

Kneel to your lewd alters…swain by the lascivious fools;

Caught under passages of iniquity…what else you wish to do…

Slumber into the cavern of invasions, you risk only the sanity of your unrefined soul;

Ill valued inside your loathing heart…where you have stolen your own control…

Seek to reap your mouthing vengeance…these times of days wasted are you.

Facilitating under imprisoned thoughts…you know nothing of what you faintly do…

Just sit there thinking you forged in trespass…when alas the shades are completely drawn…

Reveling you’re lost compass…waiting before deceptions of your impervious fated dawn

 

(Written: July 24th, 2009 10:13 a/m)

In Joy, In Peace, In Grace, In Harmony of Love

Embraced ~ Embrassé

poétesse d'amour ~ poétesse romantique

 Copyright© 2009 Poetess Victoria L. McColley

 

 

 

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Reviewed by Jon Willey 8/3/2009
this is very good poetry Vickie -- I too have written many dark pieces - and I concur that it can in fact be an uplifting experience -- I really like this one -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael
Reviewed by Sheila Roy 7/28/2009
Another amazing write. This could have been read before a joust in the times of kings and queens. It has that classic/royal feel to it. Sounds so dire, almost like someone predicting the future. Hugs,
Sheila
Reviewed by D. Vegas 7/27/2009
ViC, First and foremost we all have are demons,don't we. You are the most prolific poet I HAVE EVER READ. There is no comparison and therefore I would say you are ahead of your time!
Always,
Deborah
Reviewed by Felix Perry 7/27/2009
Strong and vibrant as the soul that splashes the words across the page in a riot of feelings and emotions with just a light dash of insight.
hugs
Fee
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 7/27/2009
Welcome to my dungeons...nothing dark here, just the shadows; nothing menacing here, just the unspeakable monsters; here we write with the ink that lies on the bottom of any ink tank on musty paper, but the words...Oh the words!...they are the truth!

Georg

Reviewed by David cox 7/26/2009
WHAT A CHANGE OF STYLE SO DARK AND VENOMOUS YOUR VOICE HAS SO MANY FACETS AS DOES YOUR WORK I HAVE JUST READ "I LOVE YOU" SUCH PASSION AND LIGHT AND HERE SUCH DARKNESS AND MISCHIEVE. YOU ARE SUCH AN INTERESTING WRITER, YOU MUST BE A VERY INTERESTING PERSON. THE PHOTO IS VERY MENACING IS IT ONE YOU TOOK?
STAY HAPY MY FRIEND AND MAY YOUR LIFE BE FILLED WITH LIGHT AND YOUR HEART WITH LOVE.
DAVE,




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