DARK REVELEATIONS (poem) by Tracie E Christian on AuthorsDen

DARK REVELEATIONS
by Tracie E Christian → (All Poetry by Tracie E Christian)
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WRITTEN FOR A CHARACTER IN MY lastest, upcoming novdel, "A Toast To The Fool" Enjoy!
What I feel is often revealed in the way I sigh When hurt starts to commence…I have to real defense against my lack of pretense No matter how hard I try. What I feel is often revealed in the way I move When pain is all my heart has gained…My every motion makes my world more insane No matter the game…I seem to always lose. What I feel is often revealed in the way I look When sadness seems to consume every dark room…in my soul I lose all control It’s like the stillness of my world has been shook. I’m lost in an ocean of emotion. I’m drowning into lost love’s weary waves. I’m barely treading water; no longer coastin’ Heart ache’s horror taking away all love ever gave. The current is so strong, it crushes my spirit. So loud am I hurting, that over thunder you can hear it My loneliness cries beyond my eyes; underneath my hair… My heart is trapped in a waterfall of darkness and despair. Written By: Tracie E. Christian 4-21-09 © All Rights Reserved

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on June 12, 2009

Excellent poem,very well written,take care

EDWIN

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on April 22, 2009

So distraught and deep in pain, yet there is so much love that surrounds you if only you could see.....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Oh my,I can feel the pain within your words..but very well written sweet lady..enjoyed very much..please feel free to read some of mine might even give you a smile..stay safe and well always OK...Hugsss