What a crazy ramble this life has been And I suspect not nearly over yet With so much seen some better left unseen But what I have seen I will not forget
Nor would I change a moment anyway In a beautiful game without regret I keep my cards close and I mean to play So if you want to play awhile come on The night is clear and it is warm inside You might as well stay awhile until dawn Make yourself at home and enjoy the ride
My finger feels freer without a ring Once I was lonely but now I am not For freedom is better than anything I just got sentimental and forgot
Nobody cares about me like I do But you can stay with me if you want to
I love to read your work, there is so much said in each poem...as if many stories unfold as one reads the words. My finger feel freer without a ring...my mom always said this exact thing, and still does. I like your line freedom is better than anything, we can trapped or weighted down by many things, people, debt, habits...this list could go on and on...I know many people who would love to feel free from various things...this is a wonderful write and again so much said in so few lines...your an awesome writer...
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Beautiful poem:
Nobody cares about me like I do
This line is correct but only because God cares about you more than you do. Keep writing. It is great food for thought.
God Bless,
Lew
Dear readers, this is my third book of poems, and inside are a special collection of what have turned out to be not only MY personal favorites, but also the favorites of many of YOU. Some of these have never been available in print before...
Using Calgary as a backdrop the author satirizes the self-serving nature of the public as it continues to fatten itself, not only physically, but egotistically as well.
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Chrissy
Once I was lonely but now I am not
For freedom is better than anything
I just got sentimental and forgot"
This is a powerful statement, my friend. Love, peace, and all good things to you,
Regis
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Nobody cares about me like I do
This line is correct but only because God cares about you more than you do. Keep writing. It is great food for thought.
God Bless,
Lew