Who would God be if God should
Be could God be understood
He or she for who could say
Who God should be anyway
Who would God be who could we
Should God not be you and me?
Reaching out from star to star
Each to each who were will be
Him or her as origin
Then again as destiny
When we end then to begin
Time through space to be again
God could be us now who see
Star to star how we are free
God is in every atom! Well penned and thought provoking.
Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on August 1, 2012
Steven, this is my favorite of your postings, reading like a riddle, a Cheshire cat linguistically configuring that unascertainable coherence. Your style is consistently mesmerizing and reading it feels like looking at the camouflage art of Bev Doolittle. ~~ Diana
If you tend to believe romantic, passionate, masculine poetry is a thing of past eras, read "She Intrigues Me," and be swept away in the beautiful craft of a contemporary poet of love.
Selected poems from previous & forthcoming collections together with Q&R apps on each page to enable audio rendition simultaneously with the written text
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