Acold heart is the sadest thing there is and you have painted the scene so well here
and although this is a sad write it is filled with beauty
I enjoyed reading this thank you
Reviewed by Larry K.
Reviewed on December 27, 2002
Very heartfelt and feeling ....well done Dee.
Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
Reviewed on December 27, 2002
Excellent one Dee.
~Sanil
Reviewed by Renee Bagley (Reader)
Reviewed on December 27, 2002
This is a beautiful poem Dee. I enjoyed it very much, thanks:)
After a long awaited weekend visitation caused by false allegations of sexual abuse, Glen got to see his children for the first time in over two months. He promised them that they would never be apart again and then they disappeared.
For a time, I perched myself on a flat rock, comparing my life with the Guyandotte River. Just as its tributaries replenish it daily, changing it in some small—sometimes great—degree, so have the day-to-day occurrences of life changed me. Like the ri
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and although this is a sad write it is filled with beauty
I enjoyed reading this thank you
~Sanil
Renee Bagley
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Tinka
This is very well written, and the chill comes through! It makes the reader feel it, and I love that in a poem, that is poetry!
Hugs, and Wishes for a Very Blesseed New Year!
Maria
forlorn verse.
Sandie Angel :o)
Your poem evoked the chilly image of love lost.Well written Dee.
Jack