Monster (poem) by Roger A. Ochs on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 21, 2005

we all carry monsers inside of us, no acception to that rule :)
excellent write!

Reviewed on November 24, 2002

authorden and you are dealing with my monster.....the one still with me,,hhmmm i am working on it....will get rid of him soon
scary write....but very good
Love
Tinka
till next time

Reviewed by richard poor

Reviewed on November 16, 2002

i let mine out all the time....very well put.

Reviewed by Mari Laureano (Reader)

Reviewed on November 14, 2002

even in claws and honest self evaluation, your lyrics soar and leave afterimages in the air....well written...terribly honest...**Mari**

Reviewed by Tien Avielle (Reader)

Reviewed on November 1, 2002

repressing our inner monsters makes us socially acceptable - writing is a safe way to vent them, eh?

Reviewed by jing javier

Reviewed on October 17, 2002

agree with ed. i quote "I will let him know that his is a beast of a writer
and i have become a monster fan".

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on October 13, 2002

You dont scare me.. Ive had a glimpse of your heart.. and it's quite glorious!!!! (giggle) katy. (did you find your gipsy kings LP, smarty?! ).

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 13, 2002

when the monster is revealed it may not be as bad as you think ;)

Reviewed by Vicky Jeter

Reviewed on October 11, 2002

Roger,
I relate to this. You might enjoy my
"Once Upon a Trauma." Vicky

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on October 11, 2002

I like my monsters blue..

Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader)

Reviewed on October 11, 2002

Pussy cat Pussy cat
where have u been?
I`ve been inside Roger
and this made him scream
Pussy cat pussy cat
do you think that was right
cos he thought it a monster
and you gave him a fright

if you kept the receipt take it back to Monsters R Us

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on October 11, 2002

Powerful Roger! I can feel the intensity of not only anger but the fear.

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on October 11, 2002

This gives me the idea that I may need to have an adult beverage before five.

Reviewed by Josephine Bohen

Reviewed on October 11, 2002

I'm with Mr. Ed.
josie

Reviewed by Tracey Hardie

Reviewed on October 11, 2002

The was a good write.. oh the humor side.. reminds me of the cookie monster!!!!!

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on October 11, 2002

I agree with Ed--"The battle within is one of the hardest." Intensely and finely written...

Reviewed by Larry Skahill

Reviewed on October 11, 2002

awesome insight
good job

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on October 11, 2002

You're so in touch with yourself!! You know exactly what you want to say...and how you want to say it! Great!!

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on October 11, 2002

know exactly what you mean, Mr. Monster writer!

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on October 11, 2002

Powerful write, my friend.
Gripping.

Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)

Reviewed on October 11, 2002

The battle within is one of the hardest
and since the monster is now out I will let him know that his is a beast of a writer
and i have become a monster fan