Our Sweet Song (poem) by Patrick A Granfors on AuthorsDen

Our Sweet Song
by Patrick A Granfors → (All Poetry by Patrick A Granfors)
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Eileen and I will celebrate our 20th anniversary this October. Sometimes I get in trouble for sort of misplacing the date. Not this time. This is for her...and us. Yeah I know it's a bit in advance.

Twenty years ago on this sweet day My life changed in such a sweet way We took our sacred vows that said We together would always stay Not just as a proud man and his wife But as partners in each other’s new life I knew then that no one else would do Just you Sweet eyes, sweet lips, sweet heart, sweet face With loving arms a sweet embrace With gentle hands a sweet caress Your sweet emotions you undress For me Just you Loving you does have its toll You are the keeper of my soul You are the rhythm of my heart I never want to be apart From you You are the rainbow of my eye A shooting star across the sky You are the patter of the falling rain Dancing drops on my window pane Just you Sweet eyes, sweet lips, sweet heart, sweet face With loving arms a sweet embrace With gentle hands a sweet caress Your sweet emotions you undress For me Just you The price of love will be grief someday Until that time with my sweet I will stay We’ve made a life for twenty years Through the laughter and the tears Just you Let's say we try for twenty more and Be as happy as we've been before cause I want the world to see just what I mean How much I love you my sweet Eileen Sweet eyes, sweet lips, sweet heart, sweet face With loving arms a sweet embrace With gentle hands a sweet caress Your sweet emotions you undress For me Just you Copyright 2009 Patrick A. Granfors

Reviewed by Ray { The Great Canadian Buzzard }

Reviewed on June 29, 2009

Happy 20th anniversary, may you enjoy each other for many more
Have a good one
The Buzzard

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on June 28, 2009

We�ve made a life for twenty years,
Through the laughter and the tears

Congrats, and remembering early is much better than remembering too late!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 27, 2009

Congrats, Eileen and Patrick; well penned love for your honey! You two are blessed to have each other and your animals! Happy Anniversary a few months early; hope it's the BEST!!

(((HUGS))) and much love to you both~

As always, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Love the piccy!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

wow, I never knew you cared;-) (couldn't resist) Patrick, this is an exquisite poem for your wife, and all I can say is God bless you both and keep you forever together,and always in love!
Happy Anniversary in advance;-)

Eileen T W-

Reviewed by Eileen Granfors

Aw, geez. Now I'm crying. e