Mentioning the end makes the reader feel the linear nature of time, while the structure of your poem also reminds us of its cyclical nature.
A landscape that has a lot to say...
POWERFUL INSIGHT...FOR AT THAT TIME EVEN THE 'ROCKS' WILL CRY OUT...NO HIDING PLACE!!! WELL DONE, PATRICK; PHRASES AND IMAGERY ARE WONDERFUL. THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE AND BLESSINGS,
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Great, thoguhtful poem, Patrick. The only thing missing are the tumbling tumbleweeds. I hope your AC is still working and the cold beer and watermelon are holding out.
Your friend, Mark
The drug called "The Shari" has been used for vision quests over many years. But, when all the rivers start drying up, the tribe must send a young hunter named Tomás on a much more important trip through the Amazon.
The drug called "The Shari" has been used for vision quests over many years. But, when all the rivers start drying up, the tribe must send a young hunter named Tomás on a much more important trip through the Amazon.
The drug called "The Shari" has been used for vision quests over many years. But, when all the rivers start drying up, the tribe must send a young hunter named Tomás on a much more important trip through the Amazon.
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A landscape that has a lot to say...
Axilea
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Desert living has always been tenuous. When water and food run out, people leave. Their artifacts remain, and peyote conjures up strange tongues.
Weirdly cool.
Ron
Be always safe,
Karen
Love,
Sage
Peace,
Dayvid
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)
Anna
Your friend, Mark