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Cloak of Darkness
by Patrick A Granfors → (All Poetry by Patrick A Granfors)
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A thunderstorm blew through around midnight on Sunday. I captured this lightning strike but what really caught my eye were the clouds that were invisible in the darkness.

Photo: Patrick Granfors


Poem Artwork

A cloak of darkness

Sometimes conceals

That which light

To us reveals

 

Luminous flash

Ominous cloud

Thunderous voice

That speaks aloud

 

Pelting raindrops

Pierce the night

Sky fluoresces

Brilliant white

 

Storm pot boiling

A blackened stew

Treetops whistle

Wind blows through

 

I sometimes wonder

If it’s best to know

What the cloak of darkness

Declines to show

 

Or let the winds of fate

Invoke their plan

To plot the course

Of a restless man

 

 

 

 

Copyright 2011 Patrick Granfors

 

 


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 Reviews of "Cloak of Darkness"
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on April 19, 2011
Wow! What an eerie picture....those clouds are ominous looking! Glad it was just a thunder storm..and not something more terrifying....looks like those clouds are hiding evil monsters....

Anna

Reviewed by Richard King
Reviewed on April 18, 2011
Wow! I almost missed this one. So glad I didn't. Love it... so much said with so few words.... Well done sir.

Thanks Dick

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on April 15, 2011
Before there were electric lights and even before campfires, there was lightning to reveal in stark contrast, the night. Your words have captured the feeling remarkably well.

Ron.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on April 14, 2011
love the write, love the photo-makes one think!

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on April 14, 2011
awesome poem and awesome pic! must have been asleep for that one the other night; but last night at 3AM i did catch the moon, which was unbelievable, wan and gigantic like an eggshell dangling in the NW sky. amazing.

Reviewed on April 14, 2011
Flashes of wisdom in this poem, and very artistically expressed, most times we do only see what we want to, don't we. Bless ya!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on April 14, 2011
Quite thought provoking - both poem and pic.

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on April 13, 2011
It is a question that applies to so many experiences in life and I don't think that there is a simple answer. "Do I want to know?" and "What is it that I want to know?", these are two of my favorite questions... Interesting, Patrick!

Axilea

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on April 13, 2011
Said well, good weather poem, liked it...ed

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on April 13, 2011
Awesome is right..well done indeed dear man...Hugsss

Reviewed by Mark Lichterman
Reviewed on April 13, 2011
Very nice poem and picture, Patrick. I'm trying to remember but do not remember a storm on Sunday so it must have been over the desert.
Mark

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on April 13, 2011
Great photo & a great write, Patrick.

Reviewed by Chip Bergeron
Reviewed on April 13, 2011
You know, I agree with you....many times I'd rather not know.....

Chip Bergeron

Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
Reviewed on April 13, 2011
Great photo! Great poem inspired by the photo! Good stuff Patrick!

Peace,
Dayvid

Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on April 13, 2011
Awesome shot- and deep revealing poetry.
Great job!

John

Reviewed by Eileen Granfors
Reviewed on April 13, 2011
I like this! Taking the image of and the sound and then applying it to the lives of man. . .well written.


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