This is my favorite so far dear Donna. You had me at the fantastic title....Your words weave an invitation to explore and walk in the shoes of those your poetry renders immortal......Beautiful work indeed my friend.
Peace,
Bill :-)
Reviewed by blue soplain (Reader)
Reviewed on March 18, 2008
succinct and slightly off.center...a swiftly tilting world in which everything blackmirrors itself. ..
i really adore you voice
i may have to 'bookmark' you...
indeed~
ness
mushrooms and food for thought...poetry travels from afar here Donna...puts me in the frame of an old "talkie" in b & w cinema, W.C. Fields/Mae West screening...be well...
Oh, I love this, so few words and an entire story unravels. My favorite part is the last line, Perfect! btw, the poem of mine called Dreamers was written in 2003, just decided to post it.
While Debtors prisons no longer exist, many people continue to be persecuted for crimes related to poverty or inability to repay money owed to municipalities. This practice remains in an injustice that needs to be rectified.
Peace,
Bill :-)
i really adore you voice
i may have to 'bookmark' you...
indeed~
ness
Be always safe,
Karen
Well Penned
Love & Peace be with you always
William
Newfie Hugs, Rose
Fee
I see why this poetic express is a favorite of yours
& the perfect pic to showcase your write!
Love It!!
Embrasse'
Vickie
Warmly,
Sage
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Janet xoxoxo