Wings (poem) by Paul Berube on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 18, 2008

Paul, the imagery in this is beautiful, and so are your thoughts on forever love. The last stanza is my favorite.

Reviewed on February 12, 2007

A beautiful poem this piece. Expressing love within the soul.

Reviewed on January 20, 2007

A lovely poem perfect for a sweetheart. I gain many perceptions from others' poetry--often not what they intended--and from "Wings" I visualize a person deeply in love, the flutterings in their heart like the breath of a butteryfly whose beauty depicts, but barely measures, the music of the soul.

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on January 10, 2007

OMG-This is so romantic!
What fertile soil you toil ( your mind, heart and soul)
This filled me with PEACE as I read it!
The imagery in your words were astounding
Thank you for sharing your heart Paul!
WArmest Blessings, WArrior Sheeeoxxo

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on January 2, 2007

Very beautifully delivered. Holly

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on December 12, 2006

Wow this is a stunning view of
Your thoughts of eternal love
Excellent Imagery and I love the soft tone
And the many colors of love on this page
Excellent Choice of words and flow!!
Love And Peace To You...Your..Friend Morning Star

Reviewed by Daring Sunshine

Reviewed on November 16, 2006

very beautiful picture and good write!
Peace&Grace,
Sharon Whitworth

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on November 15, 2006

MMMMMMm lovely, such meter here, as delightful as the fuschia's and the butterfly frequenting them.

:) Ch'erie

Reviewed by Steve Ralph

Reviewed on November 3, 2006

Fantastic poem Paul, I have to admit, I wish I had written it,
beautifully done.
Thank you for sharing it.
Steve

Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)

Reviewed on October 28, 2006

So true. So true..Thank you for this beautiful piece-

Love & Peace,
Dove

Reviewed by Dawn Mullan

Reviewed on October 24, 2006

Enjoyed this poem with the love and imagery as you poured into it. Thank you, DL Mullan

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on October 23, 2006

L o v e l y :) <3:)

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 20, 2006

Superbly captivating in romantic overtones, Paul. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Taylor Ryan

Reviewed on October 20, 2006

Just an excceptional metaphor, and the perfect picture to accompany your passionate pen...Much enjoyed,
Taylor~

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten

Reviewed on October 20, 2006

My first poem read today, I am so pleased to have the opportunity to start this new day on a wonderfully written poem by Paul Berube!
great write!
nice to meet you!:)
Kimmy

Reviewed by S J (Reader)

Reviewed on October 19, 2006

This is lovely, Paul!
Beautiful lines, beautiful poem!

Thank you,
Sheila

Reviewed by CJ Heck

Reviewed on October 18, 2006

This is such a passionate and beautiful write, Paul. Thank you for leaving me a review so I would know to look up your work. Again, this is lovely and I love your style.
Warmest regards,
CJ

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on October 5, 2006

Nicely expressed, Paul.
Peace,
Carolyn

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 4, 2006

a supernally rich romantic poem ... very nice!

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on October 4, 2006

B E A U T I F U L, Paul, well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on October 4, 2006

"Wings" takes the reader to emotions of sublimity, and flies over the rainbow of beauty... A poetic bouquet from the garden of the heart.

I salute You, Poet.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on October 4, 2006

A lovely romantic poem. It sweetly touches ones heart........M

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on October 4, 2006

Sweet wonderfully romantic

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 4, 2006

Stunning write Paul....welcome home my friend!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on October 3, 2006

Wow, its been a long time since I saw your name
what a plesure to read your words again
this is lovely
pax A

Reviewed by Gloria Buono

Reviewed on October 3, 2006

Always loved butterflies. "Wings" makes my eyes flutter. My best, Gloria

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on October 3, 2006

paul this is so beautiful you write with such tantalizing imagery..... BEautiful....
Bless you,
Joselyn

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 3, 2006

Paul, this is so enchanting! A very soft alluring beauty, that delights the senses.So good to read you again, you've been missed!

Eileen

Reviewed by F William Broome

Reviewed on October 3, 2006

This one is the first of your works I've read. This is good. You rhyme very well, indeed. Wish that I had this developed talent. Reading this work is soft and reassuring, and I know the girls will love it even more than do I. Good writin' Will be checkin' on your postings.
Bill