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Lightning Moon

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Thursday, September 30, 2004


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I’d been trying, casually,
for years, to photograph lightening.
Those spectacular bolts
of pure energy, the spark
of Life. And I’ve failed.
Until last night…

Another storm in the desert,
horizoned after dark. The full moon,
just about to rise, felt fearful.
It had to travel through the tail
of the storm, to peruse its Life. I saw

curtain sheer lightening blazing
its sheeted totality, its amalgamation
of all bolts of electric might,
diffused into lambency. Moon
tried to rise swiftly, to flee
the gap in cloud-stormed fingers.

But lightning struck Moon’s hiding place,
crafted a lighted sweep,
blue-glazed, and sweetened
by worshiper’s gaze…

I yelled out loud, from my perch
on the patio chair; I yelled
“I got it!” And laughed in delight!
It wasn’t a bolt from beyond,
it wasn’t a streak of reticulated light,
it wasn’t even an outline of energy.
It was all-life, suspended
in a flash of digital binaries,
it filled my camera's eye,
this basic primordial Being.
It eclipsed Moon's light.

And I cheered Moon on,
even as I saw her plight.
She was reflection.
Lightning is Life.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Photo by Erin Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 9/30/04
 


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Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on October 2, 2004
Very nice, Erin!

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on October 1, 2004
Great write Erin
I love the moon and any write about her
thanks for sharing

William ....peace

Reviewed on October 1, 2004
(((erin)))

lightning is tricky. very hard to photograph; i've tried (and failed) for years. once in a blue moon, i've caught a bolt of anvil lightning (spider lightning), but most of the time, i have black stormy skies to look at...or my thumb LOL :) one must make sure they are in a safe location (or close to safety). put your camera on a tripod, to keep the images steady, preferably with a remote timing release. use high speed film. good luck with your shooting! i'd love to see some of your work. :)

i'm a storm phobic, but lightning can inspire some of my better poetry. tonight, we're expected to get some storms as a cold front moves through. can't wait to see what my muse tells me :)

arizona has some amazing lightning storms. warren faidley is a storm chaser, he has some lightning shots that are stunning. (based out of tucson, i think.)

i loved the imagery of this poem, and the picture itself--imprinted on my retinas :)

(((HUGS))) and love, karla.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on October 1, 2004
"Make visible what, without you, might never have been seen" - sorry, but I am just so captivated by these words from your Biog that I'm still within their frame; they have totally pegged me as being a consummation of my modus vivendi! Hi, Erin! So pleased to meet you and thank you for your visit to my page today. What can I say? Having pondered the words above, I find here a poem that well-exemplifies this text: What is it about lightning? Is it like heavens parting for an instant and providing us with an incredible power surge from The Great Beyond? A door through which we ourselves might slip and escape into a fuller, more electrifying existance? "Lightning is Life", pure energy. No wonder it is so often portrayed as imparting superhuman power in mystical and marvellous ways. A wonder-filled write, thank you. Kate x

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on October 1, 2004
i'm a storm watcher too, love to sit and watch them develop and move

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on October 1, 2004
Erin, this was great. sort of a slice of life meets power of nature write! a sense of joy and mischief, too


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