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Unspoken Love
by Toris Okotie → (All Poetry by Toris Okotie)
  
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What is love, without loving the right person but when the right person is being loved by someone else, what will you do?


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From the years of our youth


We shared the same laughs


And now my ego yens for more


Waiting to kiss those soft lips


That ones gave a friendly advice


As the days scroll by


My love for you are well written


Engraving every thoughts of mine


Captured by your beauty


In diary I express-


A love far greater than Romeo’s


Pouring my heart feelings


As the pages flip


In envy, I stir at your beauty


Counting each steps


Jotting the very sound made by your walks


For in my world, I made you a goddess


And now I stand


Watching you say, “I do”, to a stranger


Pulling the plug that kept me living; ___You.


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 Reviews of "Unspoken Love"
Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader)
Reviewed on November 2, 2003


Oh yes, this is very very fine poetry.

I especially loved these two verses,


In diary I express-

A love far greater than Romeo’s

The pun on "In diary" is very keen!

Wonderful!


Richard Vallance
Ottawa, Ontario,
CANADA




Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)
Reviewed on July 2, 2003
No harder and no greater romantic love can you gift to another heart, and no greater personal longing can cause you as much pain. Endure it. Love her anyway. All that matters is that YOU know the depth of your love. It will sustain you. A truly grand and noble write, a wonderful sentiment!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 24, 2003
beautifully expressed , so sad Toris...

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on June 24, 2003

Oooh, love her and love her well! This last stanza punches this page. What an honorable man to write such prose! Stuns me.

Thank you

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on June 24, 2003
Excellent...BHUWAN

Reviewed by Dove (Reader)
Reviewed on June 23, 2003
oh my gosh, Toris, I don't know what to say except, here is a hug sent your way..!!

Peace,
Dove

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on June 23, 2003
Very nicely done, Toris!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on June 23, 2003
expressed nobly...

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on June 23, 2003
Sad...well written.

Reviewed by The Gentle Man
Reviewed on June 23, 2003
very dificult situation to be in Toris.....you may need to let go. I wish you well.....smile


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