Heavy morning fog here...birds aren't even flying around in it! I know this is a silly haiku, but I couldn't resist playing with rhyme. I know this isn't "standard haiku 5-7-5" format BUT this is how I "heard" it in my head! Forgive me all of you traditionalists....
The fog in the bog...
The frog on the log...
The birds above watch - agog!
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Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on December 3, 2003
..I hate rules anyway!..excellent write..short sweet and to the point!Ty
Vesna :)
Reviewed by Paul Bruce (Reader)
Reviewed on November 30, 2003
Nice witty poem, your a women with thoughts like mine, all the best Paul
Love it, Pam; this is too aDORable; and so is the litle jumpin' frog! LOL Thanks for sharing! Happy Thanksgiving to you, may it be full of love, joy, hope, promise, and many blessings from Above! (((HUGS))) and much love, your Texas friend, Karen Lynn. :D Love you, Pam!
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on November 24, 2003
LOL thanks for the laughter and smiles :-)
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on November 24, 2003
LOL!!!!
Love it......I love humour in poetry...All Australians do! ty, Dani :)
I like it, we have had some thick fog too but I haven't seen any of our resident frogs lately, maybe it is too cold here. Everything was white over for the last two mornings, a very heavy frost. Very pretty sight. Jackie <> <
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Vesna :)
Love it......I love humour in poetry...All Australians do! ty, Dani :)
love it
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