The Collaboration Storm (poem) by Tinka Boukes on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 28, 2004

Tinka,

Profound and sensitive - a very compelling write!!

Robert

Reviewed on October 21, 2004

And to think I had wanted one day to collaborate with someone, maybe like that Kostro fella, but now that I read this, fuhget 'bout it! LOL! Enjoyed your point of view...as always, Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on October 21, 2004

if he cut you loose, like a bad habbit
search for another who is willing
poets are dime a dozen .....lol
you know it's that "thingy" thing

William .....Love & Peace

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on October 21, 2004

Maybe you have the wrong collaborators, I have found each experience of collaboration to be peaceful, mind and emotion expanding and just plain wonderful! Two like minds have no problem blending thoughts and being courteous to each other.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 20, 2004

reevalution if the core of writing poetry ... when the winds shift, change to the direction of their undercurrents and let your nature see what truly lies ahead ...

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on October 20, 2004

Tinka, may the storm pass. Good, emotionally gut-wrenching write. Dawn

Reviewed by Alice Cooper (Reader)

Reviewed on October 20, 2004

But we go far baby! Only limited by the feelings in our heart.
Love will find a way:
"My Little Dream Of Love" (by: Tinka (my Angel) & Bill)

I

I have a little dream of love
Inside this heart of mine
It's very very much alive
I dream it all the time

II

Watered by the tears I cry
My Little dream of love will grow
For it is fed by an innocence
My soul will always know

Chorus .....

Oh - listen and you will hear it too
The voice of my little dream of love - calling to you
Trying to make you understand - my world is in your hands
For only you - can make my dream of love come true

Musical Break .....

Bridge ......

From the little dream inside
Noble - and kind - and very much alive
Lies the purest love of all
Wake up and hear it call

Chorus .....

Yes - listen and you will hear it too
The voice of my little dream of love - calling to you
Trying to make you understand - my world is in your hands
For only you - can make my dream of love come true

III

Let the bells ring - children sing
About my little dream of love inside
For there is no truth without you
You're my purest love of all

Tag .....

My little dream of love is always for you
Always for you
Always for you

�2004 Tinka Boukes & Bill Murray
10/8/04

Music playing is: 'Forever In Love'

Reviewed by CHRIS CYR (Reader)

Reviewed on October 20, 2004

TEARS OF PAIN...SOULS FALL APART...BROKEN WORDS...WITHOUT HOPE...AND...EMOTIONS MAKE YOU CRY...VERY SAD YIP VERY SAD.YOU MUST BE IN A LOT OF PAIN EVEN WHEN IT DOESN'T SHOW.I CRY FOR YOU.LOVE YOU CHRIS

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 20, 2004

Tinka remember"we are our own worst enemies"
you are too good, and care too much!

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on October 20, 2004

Sometimes a storm rages, sometimes in quells, but one thing is for sure, collaboration makes for interesting reading.

Great write there Tink, Glad to be able to get in here again and read you.

Huggggs
Ch'erie

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 20, 2004

Very good write, Tinks; feel the emotion runnin' high here. It is certainly for me. (Good things, so don't worry; I am okay!! And I pray you are too!)

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn. :)

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on October 20, 2004

Tinka,

When it rains it pours. Never any in between. Excellent write.

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