Crossfire Of Emotions" (poem) by Tinka Boukes on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on April 28, 2005

The beach is your sanctuary and you always
return to it for consolement. Why not
Sad but hope is there.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on April 28, 2005

Keep Dreaming on Your Beloved Beach - because many dreams do come true, Tinka - if we continue to believe.

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)

Reviewed on April 27, 2005

A very emotional poem!
Thank you Tinka
Tracey

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on April 27, 2005

Have to so agree with Robert on this one Tinka...beautiful

Peace and love, Carole

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on April 27, 2005

What Robert said...Ed

Reviewed by Linda Roman

Reviewed on April 27, 2005

why live a lie when you can follow your dream
lovely write

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on April 27, 2005

the beach brings us beautiful dreams that i don't think we should ever refrain from believing in ... beautiful poem, Tinka ...

Reviewed by Cathrine Hottran

Reviewed on April 27, 2005

asleep in my dreams is my favorite my favorite place,
lovely poem you have here, good write!

Reviewed by Dave Harm

Reviewed on April 27, 2005

excellent... I said it once and I'll keep saying it, remember your dreams, someday they will come true...

Reviewed by Larry Rochelle

Reviewed on April 27, 2005

Wonderful warmth... hard-to-answer questions.

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on April 27, 2005

Tinka,

Beautiful beach scene that brings out the sanctity of this superbly crafted work of 'heart' ... stunning imagery and word meaning sharply exemplified by your poetic brilliance!!

Blessings my friend,

Robert

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on April 27, 2005

Listen to wise Emeka. You awoke from the dream so that it could be made manifest in reality. To do that, you must bring it to yourself Tinka. It has to come from you. Keep dreaming, girlfriend...Big Hug!

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on April 27, 2005

go for the dream...they always exceed reality

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on April 27, 2005

Aww Tink's I totally agree with Emeka's wise words...another painfully sad write beautifully written.

Paul;-]

Reviewed by Emeka Nwogu

Reviewed on April 27, 2005

Tinka,
You do not need to live a lie.
Your day of joy will come
Reality will be made manifest
As the rain of your love begin to fall.

Great write!

Emeka

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 27, 2005

outstanding write, tinky; hope you find the joy in your life soon! you are in my prayers!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :(

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 27, 2005

Superb poem Tinks, hang in there!
Stay on the beach and dream;-)

Eileen

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on April 27, 2005

Crossfire. Bullseye. Tarket practice on the heart. Careful.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 27, 2005

Tinka,

And you are caught in the cross hairs of your emotions--painful to read, please take care and keep writing--some of your best work is when you just put pen to paper and take off, raw honesty at its peak.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(