As the red and orange skies Ember off into far distance With a nippy chill in the air My heart so embarrassed and sad I walk this road today Deaf to the monotonous oceans crashing waves Through sand I walk in this lonesome path Lost to the sea… no seagull around As the evening rolls over at sunset And as the orange, red, yellow and purples fade away Knowing deep inside God gives eternal life To those… Whose lives have no sin Connected to all that is love I ask myself How can this love I feel be a sin So deep… so pure… so beautiful All I have to give is myself I stop for only a moment… I listen Waiting for the wind To tell me it’s okay Searching for something to hold on Knowing I will love you deeply For ever and a day Knowing to live is to love Yes… to love For ever and a day
Tinka never stop hearing the ocean, you paint all of it so beautiful and LOVE, well it is worth each breath we take........With out in in some shape or form in our lives we become somehow less human.......Beautiful write!
love is not easy to find but we must always keep searching ... beautiful poem, Tinka ...
Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez (Reader)
Reviewed on September 2, 2005
Tinka a love as beautiful as the one of which you have expressed
so absolutely Briliant and rediant could not be a sin. in fact , it could be just right. I love this a lot Tinka ,....real beauty!!!
peace',
Rich criso Suarez
Love is never a sin, Tinka. Sometimes we have to make choices and sometimes vows we made in innocence come up hollow as the years progress. Sometimes we make wrong choices and when we do, we must find ways to make them right; but I don't believe that God intended us to suffer through our life because the choice we made was in innocence and prayer. If the call upon your heart is strong enough, you will know that it comes with God's blessing.
Take care,
Sherry
Mesmerizing and teasingly tempting to give in to love that is expressed by you so well in this one Tinka, I can feel your love and also your indecision but it all comes down to you and the feelings of your heart. If the call is strong enough you will answer it someday.
This is a book of free verse poetry that addresses the seven main tests in life and offers some sensible solutions to passing those tests with minimal discomfort.
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Tina
the colors of love. ;) Very nice Tinky!
Nice penning
Live on lady of love----->Tinka
Eileen
Tinka a love as beautiful as the one of which you have expressed
so absolutely Briliant and rediant could not be a sin. in fact , it could be just right. I love this a lot Tinka ,....real beauty!!!
peace',
Rich criso Suarez
thanks for sharing your love
Take care,
Sherry
Felix
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Regis
liked the subjest matter also.
TX