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Ah! To Be a Feather
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
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I feel like I'm a feather dancing in the air
My tresses flow behind me as if they have no care
I free-fall through the centuries, the aged times of old
I tremble with the breezes breath I fancy feeling bold
I tickle the children's' nose I flow around their ears
I buzz atop a horses back, I dangle within fears
I travel in dimensions and flow among the kings
I even scrape the golden crowns of Camelot and queens
I fall from the turrets...thrown from a princess high
Then settle in the moat below and float among her sighs
I once again redeem my place in breezes pick-me-up
I flow much further as I light to settle on a pup
The flight just then is tickled with tongues that seek me out
As children of Sir Arthur laugh...pick me up and shout
"Look at thee Mum they shout"..."We found this pretty feather"
"Come rejoice and sing aloud"...as songs of children gather
Just to travel and be free of all that's cumbersome
Brings the dreams to focus at all I've gone and done
I merely want to float away...sometimes its just a dream
Its out-of-focus wishes in life's grander scheme of things.

© 2007 Susan K. de Vegter 

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 Reviews of "Ah! To Be a Feather"
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 14, 2007
Dreaming of days of olde. Can you feel a feather under ten matresses? Tickle my nose--ahhhh chooo.

Ron

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 13, 2007
beautiful poem, Susan ... metaphoric splendor ...

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on March 13, 2007
You could become a quill of a great writer, like erm, erm, billy shake and churchill are no more, so i guess i'm the only Anglo left...

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 13, 2007
Lovely uplifting write Susan!!

Love tinka

Reviewed on March 13, 2007
No worries, no cares, just floating on a breeze of beautiful poetry--this is absolutely lovely, (((Susan))), well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)
Reviewed on March 13, 2007
No problems, no worries,like a feather floating on air,enjoying life and the journey it takes us on,Loved it,

Michael

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
Reviewed on March 13, 2007
This feather floated me back in time.
As always with your style, great flow and rhyme.
Truely enjoyed, quite refreshing
Puts life in perspective
Some things just need to 'float way'
DWB

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 13, 2007
and perhaps my final resting place
would be a in a pillow neath the head
of a fair Princess lady name of Susan
as she dreams of love snuggled in bed

Sorry Susan but couldn't resist adding my two cents worth to this wonderful poem and all the other vivid images it stirs up. Great write sweetie.

Hugs
Fee

Reviewed on March 13, 2007
Magic carpet, feather, even Peter Pan - we simply wish to float on air. To lift our oft weary lives from the ground of this demanding world. The bliss of it! Free as a bird.
As a ten year old when I first saw Mary Poppins I envied her ability just to open her umberella and up she went. I wished (wish) I could sit upon a cloud. Pity those umberellas are not available.
Ah well, I suppose we can always open up our imagination, close our eyes and drift away.

Breezy write, Susan.

Regards
Dai

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on March 12, 2007
I can see that feather floating, searching, exploring. How vividly sweet.
Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Pierre Ortega
Reviewed on March 12, 2007
How wonderful to float away, Up and off to better things Ah one day to join you, to mount the heavens wings. So free and beautiful!

Love Pierre.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on March 12, 2007
You excell at this my dear and you have made being a feather a stellar attraction.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 12, 2007
When you write like this no one can touch you! Fantastic Susan!

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on March 12, 2007
Excellant write. I loved it. Ah! to be a feather, to travel unencumbered, that is a wonderful dream. Lady J

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on March 12, 2007
A magical view of the past and the present as one floats within dreams .....

very nice.....Art Sun...

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on March 12, 2007
Yeah ....right....
and I'm a poet
:-)
Walt

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on March 12, 2007
What a magical and charming poem! I felt like a child reading this -- thank you for the memories and the lovely fantasy, Susan.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on March 12, 2007
Oh, you're so good at taking us on a trip of the fanciful and the unimagined. This one does all of that... and more. Loved every word and phrase and delicious description. Thank you, dear poet of AD for another of these floating outings. I can sleep and dream... now! - Bill

Reviewed on March 12, 2007
Beautiful and carefree!!!!! I love it!!!!!

Sandie May Angel :o)


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