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The Ghost Ship
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
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It's the time of year that The Ghost Ship drifts out of the marshes to collect her loot.


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There is a real ship called "The Sea Witch" that sank off of Ossabaw. This is her ghost.
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The ghost ship glides through the marshes as the light from a distant lantern waves back and forth on her stern. It's the eerie glow that sets your eyes as the first mist precedes the fog when the Ghost Ship glides across Ossabaw to the inlet. The small lights seem like tiny fireflies as the muffled voices of men are heard scurrying to hoist her sails. There is no one. Just this great mast from a tall ship stroking the fog and hinting at the ship's torn canvases, her creaking boards and the damp smell of musk. It permeates the mist and surrounds the marshes with her wondrous mystery. It is the voyage of long ago. Perhaps it could be Blackbeard on his way to bury his fortune on St. Catherine’s Island or perhaps Jean Lafitte as he made his way hiding among the barrier islands along the southeastern coast.

There in the mist of Ossabaw the mystery still abounds
Right here in the view of Warsaw...deep in this green tea sound
Just here in these deep waters where shrouds of grays roll in
Where endless creeks and channels wreath with north eastern winds
There lies a pea green inlet where giant oaks weep down
Their silent gray Spanish moss moans to this mystic sound
It comes up on you quickly and shrouds you most complete
It woos your gut instincts and settles round your feet
It is a complete mystery for here the spirits fly
You sense intrusion coming near the masses by and by
Out in the mist where vapors rise and chills come with each breath
She comes out of nowhere...her mast and this great ship
She moves without a whisper and glides on blades of grass
Then enters from the marshes then gently she rolls past
She looms just like her mystery, her masts of oak turned bold
She comes upon a whisper and turns the calm to cold
She looms out of nowhere but from the ages gone
There's no company of strangers or sailors with her bones
She skips the waters freely then steely she glides on
She's manned by ghosts of yesterday this pirate with her bones
Some call her the Ghost Ship...her scars, to this, attest
To battles won in victory upon her canvassed chest
Where did she hail and why has she determined this her home?
Tis a haven for her kin...her pirates and their bones
She is but a sentry left here to guard the stakes
Waiting for her captain and bides till he awakes
She comes in with the fog of dawn then she dissipates
She is loyal to her kin, their honor and their Fate
Ossabaw is gifted for the spirit here
This mystery is a blessing for all who wonder near
It speaks for faith in honor...her lessons give us pride
This Ghost so grand with her charm still sleeps with every tide
Then when's the need to check her lot, she looms through misted veils
Then comes again aloof and proud to hoist anew her sails.

© 2004 Susan Kathryn de Vegter





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 Reviews of "The Ghost Ship"
Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on October 28, 2007
Ghost ships have an allure all their own. They conjure up all kinds of images and their tale is always a generous combination of non-fiction and myth. Great poem.

Kathy

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on October 28, 2007
Arrrrrr

Reviewed by Nicky Goodman
Reviewed on October 28, 2007
How atmospheric! accompanied for me by the screaming creak of a docked ferry that has now left the port opposite where i live -very eerie! Well written engaging tale, that i am now going to read again -enjoyed very much, Nicky xx

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on October 28, 2007
Fascinating tale, marvelously told. From the Ghost of {many, many}
Halloweens Past :)

Reviewed by Pierre Ortega
Reviewed on October 28, 2007
Like the ghosts within us all. excellent, Love, Pierre

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on October 27, 2007
A ghost and Halloween tale was never told better
Excellent write Susan
Be seeing you at Labelle's Ball
Surprise! surprise!
Peace & Love Be with you

William

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 27, 2007
Superb story especially for Halloween, you tell it with such captivating imagery, Susan!

Love,
ET

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
Reviewed on October 27, 2007
Susan,
I wrote a fictional "ghost ship" poem for my second book and your poem is so much better than mine. What an amazing and compelling poem. Brilliant!
Thank you,
Jill

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on October 27, 2007
'Ghost so grand with her charm..." nice. really. Cheers

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on October 27, 2007
Indeed I remember this, and blimey, it is top notch, if i weren't so brain drained i'd write a thesis on it....
You are talent...

Reviewed by Michael Guy
Reviewed on October 27, 2007
If there were a rating system for poems: this would be surely in "Advanced" Very difficult to write such a history filled story in verse. Incredible acheivement! I couldn't do it BUT I got very excited when I read your intro: when I was writing and researching my novel: The Last Renaissance Man, I bought a huge coffee table book of history of famous tall ships and there was the real story in there behind "The Sea Witch" She was a clipper I think, but a very beautiful ship that enticed many to sign on: but then regrets, She always had a Devil for a captain and she became what was known as a "Hell-ship" Many crew never survived her cruises! Oh well, I'm glad you know a little nautica history, I love it and my book 2 of LRM is full of it.
Great story poem that rhymes!

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 27, 2007
Ah Susan this is defiantely my kind of tale...I love it. We also have a ghost ship that wanders the ghost of Nova Scotia and waters here about and it is also reputed to be a pirate's ship seeking the place where he buried his treasure. Oh the sea holds such mysteries.

Fee

Reviewed on October 27, 2007
Susan,

Beautiful, haunting tale on the high seas of adventure; well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on October 27, 2007
a wonderful writelove the story as well as the legend

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on October 27, 2007
Great piece of writing as always Susan. Well done my friend.
Paul

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 27, 2007
Your Sea Witch story always captivates me, Susan, and I would love to see her some day. The Great Lakes also have many old ghost ships, and I would love to spot some of them some day, too.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 27, 2007
Believers of ghosts and non-believers alike will read this masterpiece of surrealistic, ghostly goings-on with delight and squint their eyes, barely making out the bobbing mast as it glides o'er the sold sea or the lily pads beneath the marsh, wherever she is and wherever she is going is of no concern, the only thing tangible is her steadfastness which will not be denied . . . Gotta love it . . .

Reviewed on October 27, 2007
I think I've read your story before Susan because I remember how impressed I was with it then and now.


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