You left me lonely..
on this day..
Crying tears filled
with pain and rage..
Black tears falling.
Like dark slippery oil
on the ground..
Black tears falling..
I fall as I try
to stand..
I only wanted
your friendship.
When I came to you..
open arms
open wounds..
I came to you..
With your
synthetic
heart..
Not able to see my ..
tears ..
Streaming down..
Black on white..
Oil stained love..
on this night.
Not caring..
No open arms..
Tears you cry .
You cry for you..
And you alone.
You have no
compassion
For others pain.
Just your own..
I cry black tears..
Thick and slippery
as oil..
Falling on the ground..
Trying hard to stand..
Slipping into
this blackness..
That flows from my eyes..
Wondering..
Why...
Why you don't see..
I am alive..
Don't need your open arms..
for my broken heart..
Don't need you at all..
When I fall apart
I will learn to stand..
And when I stand..
I will learn to walk..
And when I walk
I will walk away from you..
Leaving my black tears..
wet upon the ground..
Trapping you in your
moment of
selfishness.
Until you learn ..
To walk or die..
and then my love..
It will be too late
for good bye..
As you wallow in
black tears..
That I cried from
my heart..
Never will you have
this chance again..
This chance I gave you
to be a friend.
Such a sad write, your picture compliments this poem.
Nancy
Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on April 11, 2003
this was very sad and dark and heartbreaking hope you feel better sooon
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on April 11, 2003
Erica,
so sad and beautiful
a heart weeping
cleanses the soul
{{love the art}}
Peggy
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on April 11, 2003
that is a neat picture to go with a neat poem.
Reviewed by Mary Cannon (Reader)
Reviewed on April 11, 2003
Hi Erica Thank you for your sweet comment
on my poem Reclaim your Life I want you to
know it was not easy for me eather but I had
help from a loving and caring God, this is
why I can write this way I will keep you in
my prayers and when you have time please
read the Raptured Butterfly) and Beyond the
pain and Pillow of invisible Tears, you keep
holding your head up you will survive
Love
Mary
Set in 2022, new novel features a successful Baltimore attorney who attempts a run at the state senatorial seat. But she is suddenly faced with obstacles she didn’t know existed and decisions she never dreamed she would have to make…
Never will you have
this chance again..
This chance I gave you
to be a friend.
mean so much to me, right now,
Reindeer
Nancy
so sad and beautiful
a heart weeping
cleanses the soul
{{love the art}}
Peggy
on my poem Reclaim your Life I want you to
know it was not easy for me eather but I had
help from a loving and caring God, this is
why I can write this way I will keep you in
my prayers and when you have time please
read the Raptured Butterfly) and Beyond the
pain and Pillow of invisible Tears, you keep
holding your head up you will survive
Love
Mary
YF
tony
Great write