Ohh God
I love you
came from his lips..
I will love you
forever..
There is no
other..
Love..
fantasy.
lies..
No
Not lies..
Blind emotion..
flowing on emotion..
Believing love to be true ..
Not understanding..
That emotions change..
as people do..
Infatuation..
leads to complications..
Not for me..
I never say I love you..
out load..
I try to imprison it
in my mind..
Shoved back into
a hole of darkness..
it tries to climb..
Do not ever utter
those words to me again..
I do not want your vows ..
of undying love..
I do not want promises
that cannot last..
Promises of love..
Simply an emotional ride..
It will bring you up
spin you around..
Dizzy with love..
you will hold on tight..
your resistance low..
you have no where
left to go..
so it brings you
down fast..
End of ride..
Infatuation blast..
Infatuation over..
No more
fulfillment.
No more
commitment..
This ride is not
what I wish..
So please don't let
I love you..
ever pass from your lips..
This moves me so damn fast/hard my head is spinning...and my heart is yearning ...but havne words to describe this very powerful write with lots of wisdom...now How do i say!!!
Wow. This got to me in many ways.
I'm strapped in to this emotional rollercoaster called life, but I sure want to get out of it sometimes.
Sometimes I wish my heart would shut up, but then I guess it wouldn't be my heart.
John
Maybe in Spanish Erica. By the way thanks for the kings meal. The thought was just as good as the real food. Your poem is delightful and I can relate to its meaning. amor usted mi amor. G
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on July 28, 2003
Ouch I can feel the pain in this one and can relate. Great write.
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This moves me so damn fast/hard my head is spinning...and my heart is yearning ...but havne words to describe this very powerful write with lots of wisdom...now How do i say!!!
Evol
Tinka
I'm strapped in to this emotional rollercoaster called life, but I sure want to get out of it sometimes.
Sometimes I wish my heart would shut up, but then I guess it wouldn't be my heart.
John
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~
got the lacerations
on my tongue
good write
john+
Reindeer
Imangination Is More Important Than Knowledge!
TRASK
Jack
Leland
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