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Love Floats
by Sara Coslett → (All Poetry by Sara Coslett)
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I don’t know what it is I want

and I am tired of being pulled apart

you are all wonderful in your own way

each loving me throughout the day

so stop pressuring me, don’t have expectations

I, and only I will decide my relations

if you keep pushing yourself onto me

I can assure you, I will ultimately flee

so just accept what it is I can give

tell me it is enough for our love to live

because this is all I have, all I can afford

my love needs to float, if we want an accord.




Copyright © 2004 Sara Coslett

 
















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 Reviews of "Love Floats"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 18, 2004
Great job Sara!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on April 18, 2004
Sigh, Sara.. it's interesting that we demand people 'own' their choices and pay the concequences when we mess up.. BUT.. then we quickly zoom in to interfere with the choices we make or have made... you've expressed it well, emotionally, yet firmly. Whatever this is about, the "flavor" of it holds up in life. Good job. katy xox.

Reviewed by Franz Kessler
Reviewed on April 18, 2004
True: perfect love always gave me the impression of quietly floating. We can only take so much from our partner(s). Nicely penned. Franz

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on April 18, 2004
I'm thinking of other things which float......

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on April 18, 2004
If I were you, I'd not sleep..that magic carpet won't stop unless you tell it where!
Nice write Sara, and good luck. Lisa

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on April 18, 2004
True love does float; it never smothers. Hope you find your true balance, Sara.

Reviewed on April 18, 2004
Hi Sara:

I think we all need to tell it like it is, sometimes. Great message that we can all use.

~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~


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