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giving freedom a vote
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they lined up one by one
bravely stepping forward into history

they marked the page
and cast the ballot
dipped their fingers
into the black inkwell

they were men
and they were woman
but most of all
they were free

there were no guns
pointed at their heads
there were no riots
in the streets
explosions were held nearly at bay
and the silence of freedom
screamed around the world

the people chose not to fold
under the tyranny of terrorism
that threatened to choke their freedom

in one simple gesture
the people chose to choke the terrorist
with their freedom

vive le democracy
may you know the love of peace
and peace at last

copyright © 2005 sara coslett

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 Reviews of "giving freedom a vote"
Reviewed by .. NeNe (Reader)
Reviewed on February 17, 2005
Beautiful! Very well said.

Reviewed on February 6, 2005
*STANDING O*

YES!!!!!!!!!! A most beautiful tribute to what REAL courage and spitting in terror's eye is :)

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on February 3, 2005
yes!!!
you've made your mark here as well
this is very well done
the only thing that worries me is why did they have to mark their fingers, what happens when they go home? or they are seen with the marks on their fingers was that part really necessary?

Reviewed by Mary Quire
Reviewed on February 2, 2005
Your pictures and your words will mark the spot in history. Nicely done.

M.Rose

Reviewed by Cynthia Castle
Reviewed on February 1, 2005
Sara,

Great tribute to this wonderful day! "bravely stepping forward into history" ...superb choice of words! I too watched with tears of joy and pride in these people and also for our troops and the Coalition Forces and for all that gave their lives for freedom and peace! Thanks for sharing!

Cynthia

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on January 31, 2005
I could only sit proudly and cry, as they filed in to vote an honest vote for the first time in their lives.
I heard one man say that while it was not the first time they had been in voting lines, it was however the first time, that after reaching the ballot box that their votes had not already been marked.
People that have never lived oppression just simply cannot imagine such.
Watching them, put many things into my mind. A swirl so to speak. I was immediately proud of each and every one of them, that held their chest out, their pride high, and put bravery forth, to wade the waters of unknown insurgency to demand their vote be counted, so their voice would be heard!
And then I broke and literally sobbed, to know that it was for this moment, that so many American and Coalition Forces and Iraqi Citizens have given their lives, to make this day happen.
The scoreboard truly says it all:

Freedom and Democracy- 1(WON)

Insurgents and Terrorists- 0 (LOST)

Wonderful tribute Sara, to a most magnificent day in world history!

LET FREEDOM RING!

Lisa

Reviewed by Edwin Larson
Reviewed on January 30, 2005
Yes, today was an improtant first-step in the long road to freedom from tyranny. Strange, how quiet the sore-losers and neo-socialists here have become. I guess the sound of freedom truly scares them.

EDL

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on January 30, 2005
To see these people smile into the camera, the little boy being tickled and giggling as his father grinned... no words were necessary. Sara, this is a piece with beauty and joy! katy xox.

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on January 30, 2005
My heart is full today, Sara. I am so proud of these people and to have been able to see them step forward in the name of freedom. It is chapter one in the story of a new Iraq. Their struggle is far from over, but the unity of the people against terrorism is proof that they will not be held back. Thank you for this wonderful tribute.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 30, 2005
BRAVA! You said it Sara! I watched it all with tears of joy and my blog says how I felt. Now I pray the brave Iraqi people continue to grow in strength, and the equally brave, Americans and the coalition STAY to help them do so! Fantastic write!

Eileen

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 30, 2005
Well penned Sara!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 30, 2005
Huh hmmm Britain!!! I didn't say oppressors, but how about a bite of just a nibble..lolol And Mr Blair.

Blimey yanky doodles, next thing you'll be saying you won at Agincourt..

Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Reviewed on January 30, 2005
Yeah, I agree Jerry. To all the people who denounced the United States, Great Britain and all of the other nations that stood up in the fight against terrorism, to those people who called us the oppressors I say...BITE ME!!! LOL...LOL...LOL...



In the end democracy proved us right.

(Edited after reading Andy Turner's insightful comment. Sometimes it is too easy to forget our allies. Thanks Andy for the reminder, once again.)

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on January 30, 2005
I agree wholeheartedly and I am very proud of the Iraqi people. They have waited a long time for this.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on January 30, 2005
Thank you. Thank the bravery of the Iraq people. Thank the United State troops. Thank George Bush. Let freedom ring!


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