Lately I have been reliving your desire To not just light my fire But to mix our essence To combine with me And make a baby A million different strategies Were discussed and contemplated And when they took out my baby factory The dream did not end We still tried to find a way A Clonaid way It wasn’t that you wanted me as your wife I always knew that could never be It was a wish to unite in that ultimate expression of love You knew there was no greater compliment you could offer me Than wanting a part of you And a part of me To live on eternally In a union more special Than mere words A true declaration of love Now your love for me is dead Thanks to confusion and doubt Always interfering in our romance But I will always know where your heart was And it is your heart that I miss most. When I remember the goodness of our love.
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Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)
Reviewed on October 17, 2003
I am sure you have still got his heart.
Sad and touching !
But, to be honest, your sad poems are absolutely excellent. Love this one.
Nico
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Sad and touching !
But, to be honest, your sad poems are absolutely excellent. Love this one.
Nico
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JC xoxoxoxo
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excellent write
William
I wish to God I could help you here!!
I am so sorry for your loss in life!!
Tears>>>
Love Tinka
love
Ian