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The man of her dreams
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This is something different from Bhuwan. This is not a poem. Hope you will like this.


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(One fine morning, I was strolling all alone in the garden far away from my home. All of a sudden, there I saw a girl with a warm, ripe breast. My goodness! She was lovely and her breasts were so ripe that my mouth watered with joy. I couldn’t resist my temptations and introduced myself to her, coz she was as beautiful as the Helen of Troy.)

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Scene I

Me: I am thirsty. Can I have them please?
She: No, I am saving this for someone special.
Me: Oh! Who is he?
She: The man of my dreams.


Me: But your breasts are already ripe.
She: So what, I shall wait for him.
Me: Your breast will be rotten by then.
She: No it wont be; it’s just a matter of time.


Me: Oh! Ok, but what will you do,
if the man of your dream,
comes never in your real life.
She: I am sure he will come.
Me: Incase, if he never comes in your life.
She: In that case, I shall find another man.


Me: Till then you will be old and
your ripe breasts will be rotten.
She: Oh, yeah. Let it rust. I don’t mind.
Me: And what will you do, if
no man turns to look at you.
She: Oh! Thanks for reminding me.

Scene II

She: I agree with you. There is no point waiting.
The future is hazy and the life is transitory.
By the way, I think the day is hot and you are
looking very parched and hungry. Would you
like to taste me?
Me: No. Thank you.
She: What. My Goodness…. why not?
Me: Because I am not the man of your dreams.


She: You are mad, I am sure. You told
me not to wait, and now, when I am
offering these fresh fruits to you. You
are abstaining me.

Me: I was only testing,
your patience and faith in love.
But now I am surprised,
how easily you left all
your dignity just because
of some silly stranger like me.

She: (Eyes of remorse)

Scene III

Me: Have faith in God and Love.
Then you will get the man of your dreams
and don’t worry about getting old
cause the man, who really loves you,
loves you not for your breasts.

Whether it’s ripe or rotten,
it doesn’t matter.
All he needs is a beautiful heart.
Life sure is transitory
but it should be lived
with dignity.


(We waved good-bye and headed our way.
But every single day I still see her and hear her.
Finally after ten years I met her again
beneath the orchard tree.)

Scene IV

Me: I am thirsty, can I have them please.
She: You are a rascal. Stop!
The kids are glancing.
Me: I don’t mind!
Go and play kids.
Mama and Papa are meditating.




Copyright 2005 Bhuwan Thapaliya.

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 Reviews of "The man of her dreams"
Reviewed by Janet Parker
Reviewed on November 2, 2005
This is delightful and spiritual. I love the twist at the end.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 2, 2005
Yes! I've gone down that road many times. Hopefully, it's all for good. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace.

Regis

Reviewed by Tina Clark
Reviewed on November 2, 2005
Beautiful in the difference of pen and even more lovely because of the Moral stance taken. Beauty and suspense to the very end! Well Done!!

Huggles
Tina

Reviewed on October 31, 2005

Great work. "The man of her dreams" shines.

Healthy Life, Poet!


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on October 31, 2005
Splendid write with the only ending possible.

Reviewed on October 31, 2005
Gosh! You've got her! Bhuwan, this is not your usual style, but it is so well-written! One great poem! A joy to read!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on October 31, 2005
Bhuwan,
I gotta love that ending, my friend.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 31, 2005
Absolutely stunning!!

Always good to read you Bhuwan!!

Thanks for sharing this timeless piece!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Shoma Mittra
Reviewed on October 30, 2005
Fabulously told. Loved the unusual way told tale. And yes, so much wisdom too.:-) shoma

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on October 30, 2005
a true delight. like Suzie below I was sweating it out about where you were headed with this. should've expected a class act, with a moral to the story and love shining through to boot! Dawn

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 30, 2005
I enjoyed this vignette Bhuwan and I loved the surprise finale!;-)
Beautiful drama, with a wisdom message!...

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed on October 30, 2005
A wonderful literary stuff. Loved the thread of the story and the the gentle flow of the conversation. Does this mean that women's minds can easily be changed when it comes to love? Great writing
Abdi-Noor


Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
Reviewed on October 30, 2005
Oh Bhuwan!! This is beautiful! T'was a bit worrying at first ... but then you made the heart smile!!
Thank you for this beautiful story!!!
Love Suzie xox :-)


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