I dreamed and saw you in rhapsody
Robed in erotically seductive ecstasy
In my dream, I was caressing your inner thigh
With my starved finger, hiking up and high and
I saw you getting really high, with my every sigh
Slowly but surely, we were heading for a divine ride
Blown by the zephyr of my selfless admiration
You fused with my complimentary compassion
Your seductive robes dislodged out in a flash
And feral passion lifted me up from my trance
In smoothest silence, I could hear your moan
Welcoming me to enter in the vacuum fissure
Seduced by your naked flesh, as fresh as the dawn
I moaned in delight and gulped your swallow breasts
Then I unwrapped your brassiere with my tooth and
Pulled it softly with my firm lips down to your navel
Oh! Your navel ignited fire in my lust filled breath
Then I raised my arms and grasped your breasts
I glanced up to see your angelic tempting face
But your eyes were closed and you were in groan
Arousing me to go further deep below the navels shore
And then I extended my mouth down in your navel
Our fast gasp showed that we were ready for the travel
Into the land of absorption to get the hidden treasure
I raised my head from your navel and headed up to your lips
Then I sucked your lips and rubbed my thigh with your hips
You were bubbling hot like the volcano in its prime point
As my legs slowly caressed, aroused with deep desire
Your hands were now excessively longing for my hot flesh
And you pushed me much from every inch of your erotic flesh
Ride in my body and start the engine of heavenly love
Was heard impending from your kiss sealed orifice
You completely lost control and freed your hair in the air
I was traumatized by this extreme lust present in your crust
Laughing at myself after scrutinizing the mystery of lust
I slept naked on top of your gorgeous uncultivated land
I abruptly entered my tool of love in your crack of approval
Rapidly I was hovering on and off in that small tunnel of love
You begged for more then I pushed with potent dynamism
The rhythm finally overtook the friction, impelling our satisfaction
We sailed smoothly like a ship even in this ocean of revelation
My sweet darling for both of us this cruise was a sugary revolution
Copyright 2003 Bhuwan Thapaliya
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Reviews of "I dreamed and saw you in rhapsody ( Erotic )"
Bhuwan,
Your love and passion overflow in this write. Think I may run out into the rain to cool off myself.
Superb web of desire here my friend.
Love and peace,
Susan
Jeez, what a peom for a Sunday afternoon! Great, erotic, sensual, passionate and so vivid. Well done, Bhuwan! Now if you'll excuse me my cold shower is running!
geees I think i will have a nice cold shower now......listen my hormones can't cope with all thes erotic poems today,,,,,WOW!!
But thank anyway I enjoyed it in full!!!!
:))))))))
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Wow...smoking here,
Reindeer
Your love and passion overflow in this write. Think I may run out into the rain to cool off myself.
Superb web of desire here my friend.
Love and peace,
Susan
Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$
Excellent erotica Bhuwan
Chrissie
But thank anyway I enjoyed it in full!!!!
:))))))))
Warm love
Tinka
great job
hugs
krissy