Dedicated To My Friend Pramod Ojha And His Fiance Tiggy Malhotra. May God Give Them Strength To Hold Each Other In This Era Of Uncertainty Via Their In-Born Love For Them, Which Is As Pure As The Lily In The Lake
Please don't abandon my love
That has bloomed in your heart
For your happiness is my own
So, please don't kill my desires
In the uncertain game of destiny
Who knows? Where we would land
Who would get the pure loves thrust?
And whose heart would be broken apart
Whatever happens, my sweet love
We should beat like the single heart
We have to wipe our rampant tears
And illustrate this Earth, our true love.
Will sooth your trembling tiredness
No matter how faraway I may drift
Will be your sweet lover ceaselessly
Not only in this life but till the perpetuity
This is not a compromise, my dear
For this is the declaration of true love
So don't try to scamper away from me
No matter what the situation turns out
Love is the solitary hope of my living and
You are my love from here to the infinity
Please say that in every life I will be yours
And together we will prevail persistently
Tears that flows from my painful eyes
If not you, then who would wipe it dry
The abysmal wound of my sore heart
If not you, then who would heal it dry
If you were not here, the slanting boat
Of my life would have descended down
And the wound of my heart would have
Petrified my soul, if your love was not around
I have a colossal dream of seeing you triumph,
In every march of your life. Please, show this
World that you are not born to crush and ruin
Much ahead of your heavenly ordained time
I am the one who loves you forever
Let us keep on breathing like this ever
Then one day, happiness will take the shelter
And slumber in our heart, in the pillow of our love.
Copyright 2003 Bhuwan Thapaliya
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Reviews of "Please Don't Abandon My Love ~~~~"
Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)
Reviewed on August 23, 2003
Marvelous dedication and tribute from one of the best poets around !
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on August 23, 2003
Wonderful tribute for your friends. I know they love this..
I'd Be Concentrating on My Own (Love)
Future,I'd Only Hope They Show Their Love For You In Same - As You've Read My Poem How To Know What True Friend Is_Obviously You Put
It In Writing_
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Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)
Reviewed on August 23, 2003
Absolutely stunning! To know and cling to love like that.
Bhuwan, you are a true friend this is outstanding inspired poetry for your friends. Your compassion and love shine through every word!I wish them all the best and may your poem come true;-)!
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I'd Be Concentrating on My Own (Love)
Future,I'd Only Hope They Show Their Love For You In Same - As You've Read My Poem How To Know What True Friend Is_Obviously You Put
It In Writing_
I'm a Realist Not An Idealist!!Total Strangers
Have Been Freinds to Me More Than Blood Family!
TRASK
~Jackie~
Tarek
Excellently written!
Reindeer
What a beautiful couple!....and the poem is lovely and filled with devotion of loyalty. Wonderful write indeed!
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
"~~~~Please Don't Abandon My Love ~~~~"
This poem is an inspired inspiring one.
In it, beauty flows and wonders are plenty.
The lexicon and the voice are pleasing, and LOVE is in every line
caressing emotions.
HAPPY LOVING SATURDAY.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Kudos!
tony
Love Tinka