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Please Don't Abandon My Love ~~~~
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Dedicated To My Friend Pramod Ojha And His Fiance Tiggy Malhotra. May God Give Them Strength To Hold Each Other In This Era Of Uncertainty Via Their In-Born Love For Them, Which Is As Pure As The Lily In The Lake

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Please don't abandon my love
That has bloomed in your heart
For your happiness is my own
So, please don't kill my desires

In the uncertain game of destiny
Who knows? Where we would land
Who would get the pure loves thrust?
And whose heart would be broken apart

Whatever happens, my sweet love
We should beat like the single heart
We have to wipe our rampant tears
And illustrate this Earth, our true love.

Will sooth your trembling tiredness
No matter how faraway I may drift
Will be your sweet lover ceaselessly
Not only in this life but till the perpetuity

This is not a compromise, my dear
For this is the declaration of true love
So don't try to scamper away from me
No matter what the situation turns out

Love is the solitary hope of my living and
You are my love from here to the infinity
Please say that in every life I will be yours
And together we will prevail persistently

Tears that flows from my painful eyes
If not you, then who would wipe it dry
The abysmal wound of my sore heart
If not you, then who would heal it dry

If you were not here, the slanting boat
Of my life would have descended down
And the wound of my heart would have
Petrified my soul, if your love was not around

I have a colossal dream of seeing you triumph,
In every march of your life. Please, show this
World that you are not born to crush and ruin
Much ahead of your heavenly ordained time

I am the one who loves you forever
Let us keep on breathing like this ever
Then one day, happiness will take the shelter
And slumber in our heart, in the pillow of our love.



Copyright 2003 Bhuwan Thapaliya


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 Reviews of "Please Don't Abandon My Love ~~~~"
Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)
Reviewed on August 23, 2003
Marvelous dedication and tribute from one of the best poets around !

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on August 23, 2003
Wonderful tribute for your friends. I know they love this..

Reviewed by Nancy D.
Reviewed on August 23, 2003
Beautifully written.

Nancy

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on August 23, 2003
Like a Brother,i.e. Excellent_

I'd Be Concentrating on My Own (Love)
Future,I'd Only Hope They Show Their Love For You In Same - As You've Read My Poem How To Know What True Friend Is_Obviously You Put
It In Writing_

I'm a Realist Not An Idealist!!Total Strangers
Have Been Freinds to Me More Than Blood Family!

TRASK

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)
Reviewed on August 23, 2003
Absolutely stunning! To know and cling to love like that.

~Jackie~

Reviewed on August 23, 2003
Bhuwan, This is so beautiful, your friends are indeed blessed to have such as you in their lives. PEACE AND BLESSINGS.

Reviewed by Tarek Hassan
Reviewed on August 23, 2003
such rare, transparent gentleness and loving is a wonderful tonic

Tarek

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 23, 2003
Bhuwan, you are a true friend this is outstanding inspired poetry for your friends. Your compassion and love shine through every word!I wish them all the best and may your poem come true;-)!

Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on August 23, 2003
What a beautiful, moving poem for your friends, Bhuwan!

Reviewed on August 23, 2003
This was so beautiful, I hope your friends find strength in their love, and stay strong,

Excellently written!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Floreann Cawley
Reviewed on August 23, 2003
a wonderful dedication..Floreann

Reviewed on August 23, 2003
Bhuwan:

What a beautiful couple!....and the poem is lovely and filled with devotion of loyalty. Wonderful write indeed!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)

Reviewed on August 23, 2003

"~~~~Please Don't Abandon My Love ~~~~"
This poem is an inspired inspiring one.
In it, beauty flows and wonders are plenty.

The lexicon and the voice are pleasing, and LOVE is in every line
caressing emotions.

HAPPY LOVING SATURDAY.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU


Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on August 23, 2003
Wonderful tribute to your friend. Very well written.
Kudos!


tony

Reviewed by Duke LaRance
Reviewed on August 23, 2003
...my love...that has blossomed in your heart....I really liked this. Very nice.

Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon
Reviewed on August 23, 2003
What a wonderful wonderful poem! This is excellent! ;) Silver

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 23, 2003
oh Master of the heart...this is just so beautiful!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 23, 2003
excellently crafted poem...

Reviewed by Cheryl Sellers
Reviewed on August 23, 2003
well said, great expression

Reviewed by Michael Morash (Reader)
Reviewed on August 23, 2003
Once again, a masterpiece. Well done, bravo.


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