No one can subsist happily with a broken heart (poem) by Bhuwan Thapaliya on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)

Reviewed on November 1, 2003

So true. No one can subsist happily..with a broken heart.
Love this one.
Nico

Reviewed by Libby Stone (Reader)

Reviewed on October 30, 2003

Your work SINGS! Thank you for sharing.
Many Blessings,
Libby

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

< <Tears>>>

Yes Bhuwan...

No one can subsist happily

With a broken heart

Very heartfelt write!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

So true and the pain is part of
this life we know. Much wisdom here!

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

Bhuwan, this makes me so teary eyed, my friend! Your writes always get to the soul of the matter.... sigh... stay strong, true friend...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader)

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

BRILLIANT work, Bhuwan!

Reviewed by George MacLean Akurunwa

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

A beautiful love piece, penned with great love.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

Quite beautifully whispered Bhuwan. Loved the soft even flow. Lisa

Reviewed by Erica Ivory

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

Your right... what a wonderful poetic vein you have tapped.

Reviewed by Floreann Cawley

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

magnificent..Floreann

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

"But because, if my heart
Falls down from your hand
Your heart too would break apart
And your life would abruptly
Take a different turn, and you
Will never sense happiness
Again in your life, for,
The supreme truth is that
No one can subsist happily
With a broken heart
No one can subsist happily
With a broken heart "

Oh Bhuwan...truer words were never spoken....and spoken so elloquently..floria

Reviewed by Tami Ryan

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

This is wonderful, Bhuwan.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

Really enjoyed this write, Bhuwan, and the drawing, too.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

Breath taking beauty in thought. Great write!

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

Poetic beauty...You're are a born poet..indeed!

Ty, Dani

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

An excellent write - very profound.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

Hi Bhuwan:

This is so well-written and so much emotions are packed into this. So many of us can relate to this one. Good work indeed!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)