I always remember you,
whenever I am lonely.
Without you,
I am forever lonely.
I am waiting for you
with sunshine in my eyes
clinging on this fuse called life.
I cannot live alone. I need you,
and deep down, I know you need
Me too. I have no doubt, my love!
I know, you will come back
like the dawn after the night
like the harmony after the fight, and
like an optimism after the pessimism
if not today, certainly tomorrow
and take me with you
to the land of eternal joy,
where there will be
only you and me, drinking
the ambrosia of our love
together evermore, far from all
clasping the visceral sensations
of our trust, and in that final hope
I live and pass my time
I live and pass my life
I live and feed my hope
with the dreams of my soul
come back, love, come back soon
let me adore and savor you evermore
and reign like the pearl in the ocean
of yours eyes, and soar serenely, like
the rainbow in the sky of your smiles
and never, never again, estrange me
from you, for the bites of tarantula is
more endurable than the pangs of separation.
Bhuwan, you write such lovely romantic poems. The picture and poem are beautiful. I'm still wondering if you did the pencil drawing in the other one.
Patty
Hi Bhuwan,
Such a beautiful passionate
write...
You Rock!!!!
Trixie :)
Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on January 22, 2004
BRILLIANT use of imagery in this poem..verses carefully fall back on one another..they make you traverse higher dimensions in two dimensional plane..GREAT work, Bhuwan!
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on January 22, 2004
Oh Bhuwan..I can just feel the longing in this one...some of the lines blew me away..."clinging on this fuse called life."
and
"and never, never again, estrange me
from you, for the bites of tarantula is
more endurable than the pangs of separation. "
What an ending....soul write this is....lovely...floria
from the heart powerful love expression. a j to read. Cheers. G
Reviewed by jan nunn (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2004
"and reign like the pearl in the ocean
of yours eyes, and soar serenely, like
the rainbow in the sky of your smiles "
Oh Bhuwan,some lucky lady who captures your heart :)
this is gorgeous,a touch sad with longing,a might heartfelt with love.Just sighing :)
The Matchmaker:
Angela Calminetti, mother of five, New Age practitioner and gifted psychic and telepath, is proud of her family ties and does everything she can to make sure that all of her younger siblings are as happy in love and marriage
Wow.
Nancy
Patty
Such a beautiful passionate
write...
You Rock!!!!
Trixie :)
and
"and never, never again, estrange me
from you, for the bites of tarantula is
more endurable than the pangs of separation. "
What an ending....soul write this is....lovely...floria
more endurable than the pangs of separation.
Now that is what I would call love! Wonderful poem, Bhuwan.
Antoinette
Carmen
of yours eyes, and soar serenely, like
the rainbow in the sky of your smiles "
Oh Bhuwan,some lucky lady who captures your heart :)
this is gorgeous,a touch sad with longing,a might heartfelt with love.Just sighing :)
It is so full of hope and love...!!
I can relate so very well with this one!!
Tears*
Love Tinka
Lovely art too...;-)