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SOUR LOVE
by Dawn Mitchell → (All Poetry by Dawn Mitchell)
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This is simply a poem about emotions. It does not personally refer to me but may speak to someone else.

 I give 

You take

Still I reach into the center of my being

Struggling to grasp more of me to offer

Just to please YOU

Unsure as to whether you are selfish

Desiring to please only yourself or

You just don’t seem to care

Could it be that what I have to offer

Is too much for you to bear

Maybe you are just unaware

That our sweet sugary love has turned sour

I need to walk away

You keep pulling me back into your space

PLEASE let go of my heart

MY SPIRIT

I REFUSE to allow you to break

Our sugary sweet love has turned sour

Goodbye my once upon a time sweet love

 
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 Reviews of "SOUR LOVE"
Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on May 15, 2010
an excellent write
peace be with you

William
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on May 12, 2010
ONE DOES WHAT THEY HAVE TO DO TO PERSEVERE AND 'PRESS ON'. WELL DONE, THANKS FOR SHARING. BLESSINGS AND LOVE, JOYCE*HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on May 11, 2010
Sometimes it is the only way to go, move on and get your life back on track...

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on May 11, 2010
Sounds like you caught the hint and moved on with your life to someone who will cherish the love you can offer them with sincerity.
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