Love Life (poem) by Dayvid Graybill on AuthorsDen

Love Life
by Dayvid Graybill → (All Poetry by Dayvid Graybill)
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Love Life He was looking for a place to stay She needed help with her monthly rent Her bed was cold and he was warm It was there his nights were spent. Not really love, but they got along And one thing soon led to another Back to school she got her degree Her ambition he tried not to smother. When she whispered it at breakfast He felt his heart flutter within him “I love you deeply.” were her words Oh how she made his mind swim. Her work as a lawyer was always hard And food on the table for him was fun. Preparing dinner was his main delight Just to see her light up like the sun. He loved her dearly, with passionate care She played his body hot and wild in bed, On the counter, on the floor, in the chair. Room spinning, fireworks bursting overhead. Happy kids and grandkids finally arrive Oh what love they shared thru the years Peace and joy fill their beautiful souls Their solid love conquered their fears. Seems like yesterday he needed a place to stay When she needed help with her rent He didn’t know she’d be such a good lay But he does know from heaven she was sent. 2010 © Dayvid Graybill

Reviewed by dawn You'll never know

Reviewed on June 6, 2013

The more I read, the more I like (if that's possible)!
I can see You are full of more experience and knowledge than I once thought.

Light as the Air,

Dawn

Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald

Reviewed on June 1, 2010

Now that is wonderfully put. From helping each other to love .
hug
Kathy

Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo

Reviewed on May 26, 2010

Wow, that's quite a relationship! Started off out of need for both and ended up in what seems to be a great love. An amazing journey within your words! ~Elizabeth

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on May 19, 2010

It's always marvelous when soul mates connect.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on May 18, 2010

A one night stand that lasted a life time.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

This is a connection that was meant to be!!!! perhaps a soul mate energy that inevitably found each other!

Oh how lucky they are!

Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Richard King

Dayvid,

Could this be biographical? Kudos’. It's a well told tale.

Dick

Reviewed by John Bidwell

Sweet as pie.
Much enjoyed.

John

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

what a lovely story!

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

A scenario all too real! It happens! Serendipity, good things coming without asking...I love this...both he and she are soul mates from a chance encounter, they'll probably make it to their golden years to celebrate together, Dayvid!

Love & Rent Goes On!
Sage