"Dying slowly...dying to live.
It passes by so quietly.
Unnoticed.
But not unscathed...."
I am at a loss, your words so moved me and the graphic, yes...boldly, yet sadly this tale, and it was a painfully intense experience to read it, reminds me of much past and of the screenplay's touching the pain...what a poem, Mariah! I may be reading it wrongly, but it moved me, oh yes!
Bravo, you amaze!!!
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on February 10, 2003
You're more beautiful than Mariah Carey in your picture and darker than Dracula. Your picture completely overwhelmed the poem you wrote. It is super dramatic and you could have written anything or nothing. The picture tells the whole story. I saved the picture. Is it possible to use it in one of my poems???????????????
Please let me know, Ok? Bill Murray
Suspenseful and close to home, Rain of Deception 2 will leave you in Tears. Much like Part 1, this will shocking sequel will keep you on the edge of your fingertips.
A poignant story about letting go of a narcissist in your life. Have you ever been attacked FULL force by a narcissist? It's the closest thing to being stabbed over and over in the back.
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It passes by so quietly.
Unnoticed.
But not unscathed...."
I am at a loss, your words so moved me and the graphic, yes...boldly, yet sadly this tale, and it was a painfully intense experience to read it, reminds me of much past and of the screenplay's touching the pain...what a poem, Mariah! I may be reading it wrongly, but it moved me, oh yes!
Bravo, you amaze!!!
Please let me know, Ok? Bill Murray
Love,
Mom...Susan K. Rowse