The Gypsy Madame Fernandez Is Seen By A Ghost Pt 2 (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 27, 2006

Isolation and desolation come to mind. Nothing worse than desolation of spirit, a feeling of abandonment by God. Yet it is on our part that the desolation is activated. We turn from God not the other way round. Social isolation is a frustrating experience, especially in another land from home.

Evocative poem, Anita, and somewhat...

He followed thru the clouds and mist
To form a bond......and coexist

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)

Reviewed on May 4, 2004

Great I'm still reading and posting.

Fletcher B

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on April 23, 2004

Very intense and a cliffhanger too. ;)

Reviewed by andrea coltman

Reviewed on April 23, 2004

Full of intrigue...best wishes Andrea

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on April 23, 2004

I liked the way you ended this with hope after sharing the depth of darkenss. On to the next one :-)

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 22, 2004

Fantastic captivating poetry, Anita!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on April 22, 2004

Most intriguing!

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on April 22, 2004

You've got me drooling, here, Anita. There's such a soulfulness in this "mournful" write which inspires pity and fascination in equal measures. This one could run and run... into the infinite lonely black hole where another AA is formed: Aloners Anonymous - thus to be disbanded as soon as it is started! Hope he and Mme F hit it off alright! Tantalising and excellently crafted write, thankyou. KB

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on April 21, 2004

this poem flow with the ethereal quality from which it expounds ...

excellent!

Reviewed by Sheila Jones (Reader)

Reviewed on April 21, 2004

Beautiful picture, and your poetry is extraordinary, Anita!
I love this piece...
Most amazing, mystical write!

Love, Sheila

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on April 21, 2004

I know there are evil spirits, although I don't believe in
"ghosts," but I certainly do believe in quality poetry...and
this is some of it.

Reviewed by Robert Montesino

Reviewed on April 21, 2004

Anita, Very interested to know where this is going, whereever it is you are off to a good start!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 21, 2004

Terrific write Anita!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on April 21, 2004

Awesome tale Anita...intriguing...floria

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on April 21, 2004

This is fabulous, Anita. You are writing incredibly well.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on April 21, 2004

Absolutely, the connection is the thing. Impressive poem. Great image-invoking.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 21, 2004

terrific imagery and verse in this compelling, haunting write! thanks for sharing, anita; enjoyed much~

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn the texas tornado. :D

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 21, 2004

(((lady a)))

excellent verse, haunting images--a grand beginning!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)