All I Never Thought Of (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Joe McCarthy (Reader)

Reviewed on May 24, 2004

A pleasure to read.

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on May 24, 2004

Oh my gosh Anita...t his is just so beautiful...
your lines are blowing me away here...so soft
and lovely and that ending really got to me...
floria

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on May 24, 2004

Absolutely beautiful!

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2004

Wow...Lady A...this is a breathtaking envisage of words that quench mine thirsty eyes...fantasically written...Fletcher B

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on May 23, 2004

Aw Anita...don't stay lost in your wary woods which have led to your unknownness but follow your own knowledge's path back to safe, bounded pastures! Self-exploration is, indeed, a risky business and can be fun, fun, fun... until you've perhaps scraped the barrel and have found that back at Square 1 was maybe not such a bad place to be after all! Loved this unique perspective... maybe ignorance is bliss after all, rather than setting out to pursue our sense of the unknown. Wonderfully balanced rhythm, rhyme, stanzas - everything! Perfect poetry, in fact, which is no less than we have come to expect from your perspicacious pen! Kate xx

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2004

A delight to read, it allowed the mind to wander and become as one with this fine poem. Perfection. Except, maybe "Yet none could see my folly, but the man (up) in the moon." Is it just me or would the verse be better served without the word "up?"

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 23, 2004

Lady A...Outstanding!
Your poetry is always Splendid!

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2004

"Lost within this darkness, by voice did I appeal
To character unvarnished... to show me what was real
World now deadly silent, devoid of love and light
By lunacy of folly...I cry alone... each night "

Awesome....

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 23, 2004

Outstanding write Anita!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2004

Pss, I know the man in the moon:)

Dani aint that out the jungle book?

Good unusuale, well written write, with it's own atmosphere..Unlike the moon...

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2004

Outstanding poetry.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on May 23, 2004

A wonderful write, Anita. Enjoyed this.

~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2004

A wonderful poem Anita.....I wanna be just like you! :)

Always a great read on your page....You are an amazing poet.....and a cool cat to boot!

lol ty, Dani xx

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on May 23, 2004

A most profound write, Lady A. And, of course, - great quote!
PS Love the rhyme on this.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2004

Well done, outstanding rhyme and flow.