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Bluest Hue
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The sky is not less blue because the blind man does not see it~Danish Proverb Bluest Hue The meloncholy indigo sky Breezed a solo, hopeless, sigh Felt so alone, as none did care To share his bleak and lonely air The sun reaps love and constant praise And all lament when splendor fades They suffer night, to be adorned Beneath his glow, alive at dawn For when he rests, the earth does too And no one sees...night's bluest hue!! Desolution was his fate Behind the dusk........of heaven's gate The meloncholy indigo sky Languished and began to cry No one heard him bawl and weep For all were rested..... fast........asleep Droplets of his crystal tears Sprinkled on the night so clear Silver icing speckled bright Lit the wailing, lonely, night!! Sparkles dancing, spinning, round! People pointing from the ground! Smiling, awestruck at the sky He cried with joy....till he was dry TWINKLE TWINKLE A

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Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on September 21, 2004

Dear Lady A

So beautifully composed and superb imagery, thanks for sharing.

warm hugs
Elga
will respond a.s.a.p. not forgotten :-)

Reviewed by Anthony Hall

Reviewed on September 21, 2004

Wonderful poem Lady A. I felt the tears of the indigo sky, heard the whisper of his sigh.

Your words gave that which is silent such a powerful voice!

Anthony

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on September 21, 2004

Lady A, although I have been extremely busy lately, I have continued to read all of your spectacular poetic creations since I�ve joined AD. I have enjoyed reading them and have found that with your extraordinary poetic talent, style and grace, your brilliant star shall illuminate the Heavens long after we are gone from this world. I shall carry the amazing memories of your enduring wonders throughout eternity. You have raised the perception level in all who visit your extraordinary Den, and especially in those who are willing to call themselves human beings, authors and poets. Thank you for sharing your exceptional compositions. Take care and be well. Keep The Faith.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on September 20, 2004

lady A~

One awesome poem.....
"Droplets of his crystal tears

Sprinkled on the night so clear

Silver icing speckled bright

Lit the wailing, lonely, night!!"

LP

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on September 20, 2004

Fantastic write Anita!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed

Reviewed on September 20, 2004

You brought the sky to life Lady A, glad I read this before turning in tonight,
blessin's
cynth'ya lewis reed

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on September 20, 2004

a wonderful atmosphere you've created in this poem ... beautiful imagery!

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on September 20, 2004

A really fantastic write. Wonderfully done.

Allen

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on September 20, 2004

Lvoe this write! :-)

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)

Reviewed on September 20, 2004

Wow, this is a wonderful poem...simply wonderful, filled with such passion for the twilight magic...this one is a keeper, and in your own words...I wish I wrote it...this is great poetry...ahhh...((hugs)) Michael

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on September 20, 2004

Saving this creative beauty, a magical trip into indigo!
Love i...Lady A!!!

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on September 20, 2004

Beautiful ambiance and emotion sprinkled throughout this delightful poem...Lady

Exquisite...
Peter

Reviewed by Mari Laureano (Reader)

Reviewed on September 20, 2004

reads like a lullaby..lovely images thruout...
love&light,
**Mari**

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on September 20, 2004

A beautiful image, painted in poetic hues.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on September 20, 2004

Wonderful creative write! Well-done!

Sandie May Angel

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on September 20, 2004

A brilliant, atmospheric poem.

Wonderfully crafted...

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on September 20, 2004

(((lady a)))

my favorite time? nighttime. so the bluest blue indigo sky is not alone--for i am watching. looking at the stars, searching for northern lights and meteors--and enjoying the feeling of cool arms wrapped around me. :)

a most beautifully wrought poem--thank you, dear (((friend)))

(((HUGS))), love and continued prayers, karla. :)

Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)

Reviewed on September 20, 2004

Droplets of his crystal tears
Sprinkled on the night so clear

this is magnificent!

sueb

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on September 20, 2004

Nice and colorful write; blue so happens to be my favorite color! Well done, Anita!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on September 20, 2004

A beautiful write. The proverb you quote is priceless. Wonderful rhyme. Enjoyed.

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