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WHY
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The art and science of asking questions is the source of all knowledge~A Berle 

 

 

WHY

 

Magical charms and incantations attract the weak of heart

Whispered promises, offered in shadow, end before they start

Fairytales and rainbows, easily confuse

Now you see it, now you don't, follow the trail of clues

 

 

~~~~~!~~~~

 

 

Thru the maze , and round again, trapped between the lines

Follow chance, to new dead end, left unmarked by sign

Find the prize, beneath the lids, covering your eyes

Raise them high, then gaze direct, and always question....

WHY?

 

A

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 Reviews of "WHY"
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on September 23, 2004
Lady A...I give you an "A" for excellence.
This is a fine piece of work!

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)
Reviewed on September 23, 2004
So right about this.
Never take anything for granted - always keep asking.
Excellent poetry.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 22, 2004
I know nuttin' about the Wiccan dust, (is like , you know, that blowing in the wind, song) but I do know talent personified when I read it. You have it and I would be willing to bet you had no Wiccan dust to help you either, just good old living and common sense.

Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 22, 2004
sigh....can I be you? you write incredible poetry

sueb

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on September 22, 2004
Why indeed. Wonderfully thought provoking write, enjoyed this,
Ty
Love Ch'erie

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on September 22, 2004
Enchanting, enjoyed this so much Lady A the flow is so beautiful.

Reviewed on September 22, 2004
Lady A, I sense a bit of Wiccan dust has been blown your way.

...Michael

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on September 22, 2004
BULLS EYE!! Sparkling and penetrating write, thou All-Seeing One! This is quite dazzling, Anita, and - guess, what??!! Wish I wrote it, but there's no way I could adopt your ease and fluency of rhythm and rhyme - this is quite flawless! Keeping for sure!! Mwah! Kate xx

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
Reviewed on September 22, 2004
Dear Anita,

WHY indeed ?? Powerful, and great words of wisdom penned here Anita, great write and excellent food for thought.

Warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 21, 2004
Most outstanding Anita!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on September 21, 2004
Excellent, just outstanding, I loved this,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)
Reviewed on September 21, 2004
Anita, this is a magical write...there is so much truth in your poem. We should always ask why? Great poem Emperess...((Hugs)) Michael

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 21, 2004
Wonderful poem Anita,wisdom message,
Love the last two lines!;-)

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 21, 2004
the art and science of answers is the ability to question their possibilities ...

very insightful poetry ...

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on September 21, 2004
Life is full of questions , Lady...
Its up to us to give the right answers...lol
Peter

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 21, 2004
One should always ask questions :-) Great write.

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on September 21, 2004
Why... so true. Always question why. Nicely done.

Reviewed on September 21, 2004
(((lady a)))

always. ALWAYS ask why to the Creator! A beautiful, inspirational, wise write, my friend! well done! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)


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