SHARED BREATH (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 24, 2005

a breath of fresh air, anita!

Reviewed on February 23, 2005

Roundly impressive!!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on February 23, 2005

Uh ooh, I must be united to quite a few.
This is an excellent poem.
I'm gunna be more careful with whom I share my halitosis with from now on..

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on February 23, 2005

A breath, a kiss,
Eternal bliss.

Beautiful expression of a wondrous concept.

Blessings,
Joseph

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on February 23, 2005

You are such a talent....gorgeous work Anita......you shine......ty, Dani (yep a real dag :p

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on February 23, 2005

Beautiful and I too believe the spirit is
contained in ones breath.

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on February 23, 2005

This is simply exquisite, Anita. And if one has ever been at someone's side when they die, the quote would certainly strike a chord...

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 22, 2005

Breath should be shared by true soulmates - a marvelous poem, Anita (and quote, of course).

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on February 22, 2005

Fantastic - in both concept and execution - and the picture enhances the sentiments beautifully, the twin flames breathing shared oxygen. I am sure there is truth in the supposition: God "breathes" his Spirit into us and I love the thought of this intimacy carrying through all that we are into our kiss: sublime! Last stanza pure perfection! Says so much about the joys of the kiss as much as anything else! LOL Kate xx

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on February 22, 2005

Lady A,

Gorgeous, stunningly gorgeous ... breathtaking write!!

Best wishes,

Robert

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on February 22, 2005

Mystical treat here. And something to think about. Maybe if you don't enjoy kissing someone, it's a sign, no matter how many other things you like about them. Hmmm. ;-) Enchanting poem, Anita.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on February 22, 2005

Beautiful write.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 22, 2005

Oh this is a beauty Anita!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on February 22, 2005

Lady A,

Breathtaking and so beautifully penned--stunning!!

(((HUGS))), love and continued prayers, Karla. :)

Reviewed by Janet Parker

Reviewed on February 22, 2005

Beautiful poem and interesting story.

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on February 22, 2005

Wonderful poetry.

Reviewed by Jennifer Butler (Reader)

Reviewed on February 22, 2005

That is so very beautiful, Lady A. Such grace and flow in the lines, and the sentiment well expressed. I do love the quote above accompanying this.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 22, 2005

Gorgeous, sublime, just what I was thinking when I wrote mine;-)
We are like-minded this morning;-)Beautiful poem, Lady A!

Love, Eileen

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on February 22, 2005

This is very beautiful and we in the Indian culture have a saying about the breath of an animal.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on February 22, 2005

This is a damned beautifully written and touching poem, Lada A. When your brerath is shared by a TRUE soulmate, there is just nothing in this world can compare. Good.