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BATHE BENEATH THE SEA
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But what minutes! Count them by sensation, and not by calendars, and each moment is a day. ~Benjamin Disraeli


BATHE BENEATH THE SEA

Where go the stars, during the day
To rest their silvered shine
When night would close the temple doors
And sun, becomes the shrine

Where do they rest, those brilliant sparks
That light our way thru dreams
And guide lost ships to harbors neat
With sparkled maps by gleam

Where do they store, all the wishes
The young recite thru poem
Is there a cosmic waiting room
Where they won't glow.....alone

Where do stars....rejuvinate
Look deep and.....and please....believe
The stars find rest, beneath the crest
And bathe beneath the sea

Ahhhh

PAX
A
5/8/06
 

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 Reviews of "BATHE BENEATH THE SEA"
Reviewed by J.L. Day
Reviewed on December 21, 2006
Mesmerizing! I look forward to reading your works, I am learning SO much! Reading MY attempts just shows how NOT to write, yours is enlightening and gives one hope for what COULD be....

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on May 24, 2006
DE- LIGHT - FUL !!! Should be a Hans Christian Andersen tale... can just see this illustrated, like The Little Mermaid. Mwah! Adore the quote too... life is measured by the quality rather than the quantity of moments - and this one is magical. Top drawer write of the bottom floor (of the ocean!) TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 24, 2006
Oh splendid poetry!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on May 24, 2006
I love this one : ) Absolutely beautiful!

Jack

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 23, 2006
a magical and beautiful poem ...

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)
Reviewed on May 23, 2006
Too lovely for words!
In a class of its own.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on May 23, 2006
Ahhh indeed. Quite a delectable read. Thanks for the hand sign signals. Been practising for the last hour.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 23, 2006
Bravo bravo bravo, this is in my mind at least, your finest write. It captures the magic, the wonder and the beauty that we once saw in the stars and perhaps now will look for again. Thank you for sharing.
Felix

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on May 23, 2006
Anite
A wonderful metaphysical write that has distinct shades of the Rubaiyat of Omar Khayyam
....
This superb composition lights up the Den tonite !
Peter

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on May 23, 2006
If the stars go beneath the sea, where does the sun rest...it would be put out if it were in the sea, wouldn't it...? Ed

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on May 23, 2006
Was wondering the very same thing, Anita. Read this aloud-very beautiful. Consider sharing it on podcast, will you? Created from
the stars we are birthed in sea. Perhaps our dreams wait there for us...

Lin

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 23, 2006
You convinced me;-) Beautiful poem A~ this creates a bit of magic!

eT


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