I do love the flow and the ambiance created by your verses, Anita. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Like the slow-ripening of fruit that both yields and nourishes the seed. A fecund fantasia that drips through the mind like dew from the Hanging Gardens of Babylon. Sultry images. TY K xx

I love your poetry, Anita, so soft and flowing. Lovely work, always.
Love,
CJ

beautiful imagery in Edens Garden....

Eden's temptation positively flows through your pen Anita...delicate with desire and profoundly passionate!
xo Taylor

Anita - you are such a talented lady. Your poems are like mist, shrouding us in the love you expresso well. ~ Sara

Sweet

I read this aloud. It is really beautiful when you match the words with the same passion of voice. Beautiful write and moving.
God Bless,
Lew

A beautiful write Anita totally enchanting...I love the pic too.

it wasn't a real booger lol

Paul;-)

A very captivating poem and graphic, Queenie.

Passionate offering Anita!!

Love Tinka

A passionate desire of a great romantic!Loved the soothiness and positiveness of your poem.Lovely picture too

Bom Bhole!
Roshan

To think that man had it perfect at one time in the Garden of Eden: perfect environment, perfect man/animal relationships, perfect climate, perfect relationship with God and perfect relationship between man and woman (Adam and Eve) - perfect emotions -perfect love, no negative emotions in Eden such as jealousy, bitterness etc. no. that's right out, they're denied completely.
Perfect mentality and physical conditions - no bald patch, crookedness, sagging, decay, illness, sorrow or tears. Perfect government too - no need for an economist in Eden because there was no greed and nothing that needed to be spread out economically - everything was there in abundance, perfect and indulged perfectly.
But then man went and spoiled it all through one act of disobedience. One tree, that's all God asked, stay away from just one tree. But no, we just had to stick our nose in didn't we? Ruin it all.
All we can do now in this fallen Eden of a world is fantasise about the original:
An oaisis of warmth
A shelter inspired
Petals unfoldng
Eden's desires

The beauty is there in poetry, but for the believer, there is another beauty. Genesis is paradise lost, but Revalation is paradise re-gained. In faith we look forward to dwelling once more in 'an oasis of warmth' with God providing the sunlight.
Your words have been a trigger of elavation this morning, Anita.

a passionate period of desire in Eden's unfolding cycle of love ...

There is a sense of quiet contentment in this poem. Your art is great Anita. Victor

Goodness that's a gorgeous picture to go with your gorgeous phrasing. :-) Saw your comment on Aberjhani's poem. Yes, that's me. LOL. Ooops! I forgot to comment on his poem. Peace to you Anita, and I hope you got my response to your last note, Jersey Lady. ~~Nordette

WOW!!!!!This is a breathtaking write and piece of art! You described it to its fullest and then continued in overflow! Take a bow! or a curtsey or a obeisance, a gesticulate, some motion of excellence!!!!!!! Smiles!
You go girl!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy

A rapturous vision of Eden's Desires, indeed! The bloom opens to fulfilment with your words. Anita, is it...kudos to you.

Micke

This captures the imagination of the dreamer in all of us as your romantic soul writes of love and life. Well done Anita,
Fee

I can't think of what to say... perfect form and words from such depth of thought...

This is stunning as well as soothing, Anita. Simply put, beautiful poetry!
Take care,
Sherry

Anita this is a work of art in all respects. Beautiful pic and the words are simply superb. You are so talented. Brava!
Chanti