Come To My Chamber (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 11, 2009

I like how you've woven a layer of mystery into this poem. Again, the ending is superb. The way you break up that line feels romantic and enticing. I'm sure he stayed:) lol
Sheila

Reviewed by Jerry Andrews (Reader)

Reviewed on May 2, 2004

Flood my dam, you sensual woman. You have big appetites, huh? That's a good thing. I'm glad you liked Willow and Journey. Yes, that fate is a given. See you later-Jerry- To be precise- dam, not damn.

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Reviewed on June 22, 2003

I HEARD A FREAKIN' ORCHESTRA! Well, lemmie say that this one knocked all over the place...lol! Sensual and tactful how you write about the art of sex. Loved this too. Very well done.

Thanking you,

Teresa

Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)

Reviewed on June 18, 2003

Now this is chamber music
It hums with romance and sensuality

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on June 18, 2003

great write...loved this much....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on June 18, 2003

Lady A this is fabulous and written with such style, class and grace!!!!
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on June 17, 2003

Beautiful work.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 17, 2003

the chamber is a hot place to remain in for a long time...

Reviewed by Kerry Compton Star Girl

Reviewed on June 17, 2003

Perfect rhythm, love the sensuousness of this. ~Kerry

Reviewed by The Gentle Man

Reviewed on June 17, 2003

Anita, I love this! A very steamy poem laced with romance....The photo is gorgeous and very appropriate for the subject matter! Thanks for sharing!

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle

Reviewed on June 17, 2003

This is beautiful, well-written and pleasingly perfect!!
Thanks, Lady A............
Jill :)

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on June 17, 2003

Great poem Lady!! The rhyme is wonderful, and I love it when they rhyme!

Jack

Reviewed by Steve Ralph

Reviewed on June 17, 2003

brilliant, sensual, and romantic i love this ..
thank you lady a for sharing it..
steve

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on June 17, 2003

Fantastic sensual poem that flows just like the chamber.

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on June 17, 2003

What a wonderful sensual poem. I had to read it a few times as it is that good!!!!

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on June 17, 2003

All of it is fantastic--but really like...
"Come to my chamber, and enter my heart
My body a canvas, for love's work of art
I'll be your creation, my half is your whole
Our story unwritten, yet endlessly told"

Reviewed by nevine Al Seidi (Reader)

Reviewed on June 17, 2003

Anita, you won me at both words and picture! Are you sure you have no Arabic genes; I sniffed some here!
Got my message about Iranians and the picture of "To Decipher This Loveliness"?

"Come to my chamber, the door is unlocked" is my favorite line...promising.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on June 17, 2003

So lovely, softly sensual.

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on June 17, 2003

Very Lovely Writing, Anita!

tony

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on June 17, 2003

Lovely, flowing and sensuous!

~Joseph

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on June 17, 2003

Lady A. Poetry at it's best. Very beautiful and sensual write.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 17, 2003

good write! (((HUGS))) and love, your friend, karen lynn in texas. :)

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on June 17, 2003

"Come to my chamber, the door is unlocked
My soul knows your footsteps, the sound of your knock
My heart feels yours beating, my lungs feel your breath
My body is yours, from this moment till death"
Excellent, Lady A! Excellent...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on June 17, 2003

The shadow knows.