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A Different Place
by John Herlihy → (All Poetry by John Herlihy)
Friday, March 31, 2017    Rated "G" by the Author.
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A Different Place
By John Herlihy

A few things take me to a different place;
I climb from the box into wide open space.
Writing poetry is one of those rare things;
My spirit comes alive as my red stylus sings.

The truth is we live common, humdrum lives,
Stuck inside a box where no fresh air thrives.
We earn our living from the drudgery of work;
We grow old and retire without a single perk.

We pretend that hope is just around the corner;
In my case, I lived abroad a perpetual foreigner.
Always seemingly outside in the cold looking in,
Surrounded by languages that sounded like Latin.

I grew up in the heady days of the flower children,
Smoking the grass and weed like a Tibetan pilgrim.
Suddenly, the world we live in seemed but a hoax,
As the pungent smoke turned everything into jokes.

Once the mood settled, one felt a sense of magic;
The days of our lives no longer seemed so tragic.
Everything that the senses now saw and touched
Seemed a different place with stardust brushed.

Color seemed deeply drained from heaven’s rainbow;
Layers of percussion and cords strummed life’s bow.
Lyrical melodies invaded every corner of the room,
A residue of trouble swept away by music’s broom.

May one last wish take me to that final resting place,
Welcomed with wide open arms and amazing grace.
Draw down the shades and slowly lower the lights,
When the last train departs on a way to new heights.

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Reviewed by Rebecca McKeehan
Reviewed on April 16, 2017
I don't know if you meant to sound so forlorn but this poem read as sad to me. Well written, though.

Rebecca

Reviewed by Darryl Ehlers
Reviewed on April 3, 2017
Hi John, The first poem I wrote was two pages long. I asked my wife to cretic it. By the time she was done there was pencil marks all over. I got up on my high horse and said what does she know of poetry. I let it set for a number of days. Then I looked back and realize there are writers and there are readers. I learned to except critec. besides being a bad speller. No reader will allow a writer to mispell. I like your poem and use of rhythmics I think you need to compress your poem so it is not long legged
Darryl Ehlers

Reviewed on April 2, 2017
So lightly the brush of your pen has scanned part of a lifetime, well, not counting the train. (I saw the gingerbread house! lol!)

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed on April 1, 2017
this is the voice we all need to hear frequently on our different ways to all the same terminal station. . . O the trains running towards there! . . the tail cars are always reserved by some others. . . an excellent work has been done here. Cheers, alex

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on April 1, 2017
Always a realist, I never got into the mysticism created around drugs, whether it be acid, mushrooms, or pot. I mellowed out on liquor occasionally, but never where I became a drunken fool. Still, as life goes by like you point out, the drudgery takes over and we end up leading rather meaningless lives of making a living and even, while moving into retirement, continuing the drudgery instead of the freedom we had when we were young and the world was wide open to us.

No train waiting for me and that's just fine.

Ron

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on April 1, 2017
If in my sleep,
I can not die,
my last wish would be,
let me get high.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on April 1, 2017
I was never drawn to the weed, it just made me hungry and sleepy. Even so I had many moments when "The days of our lives no longer seemed so tragic." I still to this day feel that, as old as I am.

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on March 31, 2017
YEA! THIS IS THE ONE PROMISE WE CAN CERTAINLY...COUNT ON. THANKS FOR SHARING, MY FRIEND, ENJOYED. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS


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