These "subterranean" currents tend towards the melancholy that seems to pervade the whole poem. I don't see any emotions here of accomplishment, joy or happiness erupting from a life well lived.
But perhaps, the intention was to look at the dark side of our existence by the word "subterranean." As if in the grave.
This is just excellent. I especially liked the line about wanting and needing. I have often told my kids that you have to take care of what you need, before you get what you want.
But perhaps, the intention was to look at the dark side of our existence by the word "subterranean." As if in the grave.
Ron
Love ya!
Jane
pearls of wisdom
regards
roseline